Quoting Caleb Anju
I'm doing a survey asking people how they are enjoying the series so far, as to decide what things need working on, and what is good so far.
How are you enjoying "Demigod Adventures" ?
d) Needs work...
e) Not so good.
I'm going to go with C. you need more drama, not just go fight something then, choice
go fight something then, choice
go fight something then, choice,
yours already has more drama then mark's, but could still use a bit more. (I hope I'm not being rude)
Be completely honest, don't be afraid to give your opinion. After all, I'm doing the series for your entertainment! Just comment what letter you chose, ex: "I choose b)".