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Window Washing Fail (Fail 6x6 Contest)
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Well, this group has been quite inactive recently, so hopefully this helps to reawaken it...
Could I have some advice on this: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/337312 ? I CC'd LCV's Cretaceous Jungle and Broken Bricks' SF-100: Star Fighter 'Swallow'.
Thanks in advance!

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| August 16, 2012, 11:23 am
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Quoting Halhi 141
Well, this group has been quite inactive recently, so hopefully this helps to reawaken it...
Could I have some advice on this: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/337312 ? I CC'd LCV's Cretaceous Jungle and Broken Bricks' SF-100: Star Fighter 'Swallow'.
Thanks in advance!

Pretty nice work. I like how it's a small scene with much action going on in it. Also, with small scenes you can add in alot of details which you did well.
The best part is probably the window.

To improve, I wouldn't show shots of the inside. And I would maybe add some details on the side of the house. Like a gargoule or a sculputure like-thing.

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| August 17, 2012, 6:58 am
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