Legends of the Clone Wars, Part 3: A Unwanted Visitor: A LEGO® creation by Lord J : MOCpages.com

Legends of the Clone Wars, Part 3: A Unwanted Visitor

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Part 2 of Legends of the Clone Wars! It is short but it sets the scene for the next one. Enjoy!

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As the war rages in the the outer rim the Republic is having troublic keeping track of sepertist movments, the send the 282nd to Endor to scout out a area for a listening base. After this order Ki-Paul was called back to the jedi temple...

The "Hornet" lands in a clearing on Endor.

The men come out.

Something comes out of the ground and starts watching them.

Commadner J: Alright men, you know the mission, we will set up camp here then serach the area.

The men start getting out supplies.

Commadner J: Trooper.

Scout Trooper: Yes sir?

Commander J: Start scouting the area for a location for the base.

Scout Trooper: Yes sir.

The scout trooper goes into the woods.

Suddenly one of the men gets shot!

Skillet: What was that!?!

They turn around and see a walker.

One of the clones shoot at it but it harmlessly hits the walker.

The walker fires at them.

But they get out of the way just in time.

Commander J: Fall back to the ship!

They turn around and run.

But the wing falls down and blocks there way before they can get in! THey look up and see...

...Grevious!

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Owen Ferguson
November 20, 2010
it really needs an ending

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starwars rapper
April 23, 2009
cool and btw you are now 1 of my favorite builders!!!!!

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G@NN0 of the 361st
March 27, 2009
nice i noticed some hair and dust.. ha but i like the comic

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Elite ARC Commander Zealot Fett

March 25, 2009
Nice! Can you comment on my new MOC? It's me Bluefire

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GC/O: Captain Rocky: NR/CB
March 13, 2009
Nice work! I was going to look at this a while ago but I forgot!

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Matt The Backward One
March 9, 2009
I just read 1 through 3 & I have to say! These are good! I'll definitely follow the story to the end! I have a comic of my own... It takes place during the early dark times when the empire slowly demolishes the remaining Sepy's battle droid army. If you have the extra time, please take a look at those... Look forward to seeing the next part to see what Grievous does! Thanks. (http://www.mocpages.com/folder.php/42305)

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Commander Dev
March 3, 2009
Excellent story! (And the CIS walker of course!)

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Supreme Commander: Torch
March 3, 2009
I wouldn't want grievous on the back of my gunship either. And, could you check out my newest MOC when you get time?

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Supreme Commander Michael Sloper

March 2, 2009
Can you check out my newest Moc it's called, E.C.A. tag #5

Commander Lard
March 2, 2009
It looks complicated to do that to my home page

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comander delta
March 1, 2009
cool story and walker mabey a bit longer

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Swank Olko Leader of the clone revolution 138
February 28, 2009
Love that droid walker check out my comics and tell me what you think

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Commander Jaller
February 28, 2009
Awesome comic. Great job. But it starts annoying me that people spell it as "Grevious" "Grievius" "Grevous" or anything like that. It's GRIEVOUS - just so you know..

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Supreme Commander Michael Sloper

February 27, 2009
Awesome! Your best comic yet! I really like the camera idea and the walker is just... AWESOME! I also like the plot put into it. Anyway, well done! Keep it up!

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Council Member Ben Jammin (Galactic Marine)
February 27, 2009
Hey, I'm sorry I wasn't able to get to comment on this earlier, its my B-Day and I had school and all this other stuff, so sorry. Anyway, great job, I really like it. The camera coming out of the ground is cool and the droid walker is just awesome, it is so detailed and really heavily armored. Great job! It sets the plot for the next one!, how fun I can't wait! I havn't been able to upload anything for a while because my computer has crashed! :( But it is good now and I should be able to start soon, maybe tomorrow or the next day. Anyway, Great Job! I can't wait for the next one!!!!

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Camoflauge Trooper
February 27, 2009
I like how some things are yellow it makes more awesome

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Sammy Harris
February 27, 2009
Wow! Great story, can't wait for the next one. I like how the camera comes out of the ground

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