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Ambush!! Starwars Comic #1 (FINISHED!!!!)
A small force of clones and jedi are sent to scout out a planet in the outer rim.....
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The "bluenose" gunship lands on a small, green planet in the outer rim.

Commander Waxor: Well, here we are!

General Mach: we are, I do not have a good feeling about this.

Commander Waxor: Why do you say that?

General Mach: There is a disturbance in the force.

Scout: Sir, my scanners are picking up a large force of droids.

Commander Waxor: How large?

*clone screams in background*

Commander Waxor: Weall, nobody liked him anyways.

Scout: As I was saying....THAT LARGE!

Commander Waxor: Holy $#!!

Droid commander: we have been sent to capture you. you are outnumbered. please surrender as to make it easy on yourselves.

Captain Boyle: I dont think so! Men, Evasive action!

!*Battle music starts playing*!

General mach does a flip....

....and cuts down a genosian droid.

General Farr charges in and cuts down another genosian droid, while kicking a third rocket droid.

Mikey Stormflier force jumps and disables a S.T.A.P.

The scout launches a rocket at the droid supply speeder.


(Note: I like what i did with the fire.)

(A few Minutes later....)

General Mach force pushes a droid.

General Mach: There, I think thats the last of 'em.

Commander Waxor: Sir, look what we got.

Droid: I wil never speak!

General Mach: After we rewire your circuts you will!

Droid: Uhh, lemme refraise that, I'd love to talk!

General Mach: I thought so.

(Another few minutes later.....)

General Farr: So there is A hidden droid base on this planet, I suspected so.

Mikey Stormflier: And we have the coordinates!

General Mach: Not so fast Mikey.

Jik (Clone gunner): Sir, if I may, I dont think we are very well equiped, armed, or numbered to do a direct assult on a droid base.

General Mach: Smart idea Jik, We will fly back to base and get reinforcements. You just cant beat clone logic. EVERYONE! Back in the gunship!

Everyone gets in, and they get ready for takeoff.


Pilot: What the!?...


General Mach: EVERYBODY OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

General Mach: Damage report!

Commander Waxor: Well sir,...

...The gunner, rob, is dead, and the pilot, Mike, is in the bacta tank, and we have hal and boyle on the roof with their snipers, to see if they see any large forces of droids incoming....

...We have Bill the gunner, with the minigun, and John, the scout with his rocket, down here. we also have secured the perimeter.

General Mach: Good, so the only casualtie was rob.

Waxor: Yes sir. And frankly sir, I dont think that was just any aat shot either.

Scout: you are right, my scanners are picking up something getting very close, and it is going MUCH faster than an aat!

Waxor: What??

Scout: THAT!!!

Waxor: OH MY ...... *starts shaking*

Bill gets up;

Bill: Sir, I can distract him for as long as I can, and that may give you guys some time to run.

Scout: sir,.....

General Mach: hold on John.

General Mach: No Bill, no man left behind.

Bill: let me do it, please.

Scout: SIR!!

General Mach: WHAT JOHN!


Scout: *pointing* LOOK!

Captain Rafe: Well well well, looks like we got here just in time.

Mikey: What Is THAT?!!!

General Mach: Rafe, old friend, lets catch up on the way back to camp in well, whatever that is.

Waxor: What about the bluenose??

General Mach: once we get back to camp, we'll have it salvaged.

(After everyone is inside, introductions are made)

Rafe: This is the prototype of something called the juggernaut, whatever it will turn out to be. We are nicknamed the Candy Corps, because all of the prototypes we test are made from scrap metal, so it is multicolored.

General Mach: and who is this, your right hand man now?

Rafe: his name is Roger, he is going to train to become one of the elite corps.

Mikey: Roger, Roger, ha ha ha. * a glare from roger silences mikey*

Boyle: Nice helmet, are we getting upgrades in armor?

Clone: Yeagh, we were the first, because we do all the dirty jobs, you will probably get yours soon enough.

Boyle: Sweet.

*Holovoid rings*

Chanceller Palpatine: Good job today men, you will all be sent back to coruscant Immediatly for debriefing!

*Everyone sighs*

Waxor: another day, another debriefing........


NOTE: This is the first of my starwars comic series, expect more to come soon!


 I like it 
  July 17, 2009
 I made it 
  April 21, 2009
Quoting Xserozon Hayabusa Awesome, I enjoyed reading It. I also like that the part when he said "Well, no one liked him anyway".
thanks, I thought of that as I was reviewing it, and just popped it in. Thank you, now im looking for ideas of the next installment, any ideas?
 I like it 
  April 21, 2009
Awesome, I enjoyed reading It. I also like that the part when he said "Well, no one liked him anyway".
 I made it 
  April 21, 2009
Just finished!! please rate aand comment! THANKS FOR VISITING~ }:-)
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