Empire of Darkness: Chapter 9. Also the season finale of season one of the comic.
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[Play this music if you want a more movie-like expirence]
Empire of Darkness: Chapter 9
A brave Jedi knight has boldly contacted some friends of his to plan for a rebellion against the evil GALACTIC EMPIRE. Litle do they know, the Empire is right behind them...
[On Corellia]
Ricky: I have a friend here. He can help us.
[They land]
[Rocky and Ricky climb out]
[LAnding Pad atendant comes over to them]
Attendent: It'll be 50 Creds a day for that.
Rocky: THat's ridiculous!
[Ricky waves hand]
Ricky: You don't need to be paid.
Attendent: I don't need to be paid.
Ricky: You will let me keep my ship here as long as I want.
Attendent: I will let you keep your ship here as long as you want.
Ricky: THank you sir, have a good day.
Attendent: Thank- uh, have a nice day.
[Rocky and Ricky walk away as a landspeeder pulls up to them]
LAndspeeder driver: Need a lift?
Ricky: Sure. 780 West Please.
Landspeeder driver: No prob. Hop on in.
[Rocky and Ricky climb in and the landspeeder drives away]
[Later, in office]
REceptionist: Mr. Bob can see you now.
[Ricky and Rocky walk into office]
Ricky: Rocky, this is my friend, Mitch Bob. Mitch, this is who I was talking about.
Mitch: Pleased to meet you Rocky.
Rocky: Likewise.
Ricky: When will the others be here?
Mitch: Soon. Darman and the soldiers got tangled up; they'll be here in a bit. OOM-27 is already here, and Tom is here too.
Ricky: Good. Rocky, you might wanna go down to the basement, we'll be there in a bit.
Rocky: Alright.
[Rocky leaves]
[In basement]
OOM-27: SO YOU ARE THE ROCKY I HAVE HEARD ABOUT. I AM PLEASED TO MAKE YOUR ACQUAINTANCE.
Rocky: Er, likewise.
[Later. All of the rebel leaders are there]
Ricky: So, hello everyone. Let's get down to buisiness.
OOM-27: THE SENATOR WAS KILLED, SO HE IS NO LONGER ANY ASSISTANCE TO US.
Ricky: Dangit. Darman?
Darman: Well, I think I can help. I have an army on hand in Polis Massa, along with some Medium Transports and two captured Star Destroyers.
Ricky: Excellent. Now we-
[Exlposion. Wall is broken]
[Stormtroopers rush in. A tank is right behind them]
[Rocky's son, now a Sith known as Darth Kalo comes in]
Darth Kalo: I have you now, rebel scum!
Another good installment! I like the cliff-hanger ending. How could all you Ex-Reppies join the Rebellion! Just kidding, anyway, it was neat how other people from the MP met up in that basement. Nice job!
woah! Thats awesome! I haven't read this series but i think now i will go back and read them all! I see some major people in there. Including Awe am I right? He's OOM 27. is Darman the one from Omega Squad? If so, that's cool too.
Quoting SwordFish .
Not bad. Sort of weak for a season finale though. I mean, it's not much of a cliffhanger at the end. I do like how you included different people's sigfigs: it makes the story more interesting.
Nonetheless, if I were you, I'd add at least one more part before the Season 1 finale, if I were you.
Well, actually, the season finale thing isn't really anything. Just my excuse to make a new folder and Start a new little format for it.
Not bad. Sort of weak for a season finale though. I mean, it's not much of a cliffhanger at the end. I do like how you included different people's sigfigs: it makes the story more interesting.
Nonetheless, if I were you, I'd add at least one more part before the Season 1 finale, if I were you.
