This is the Sequel to Jedi Temple: the lightsaber,
before you go on I will warn you there will be very little revealed each episode for awhile.
About this creation
On a frozen planet near the outer rim, Jedi Master Quatarr is camping out in the harsh wheather.
Master Quatarr rises to his feet with the cold air whipping against him. He walks over to a shovel and prepares to dig a trench for him to sleep in. He can hear faint foot steps behind him and they became louder as "something" drew nearer.
He firmly grasped the shovel that he had brought with him on his journey. The foot steps had been blocked out by the roar of the wind.
Suddenly the footsteps were very clear and his curiosity took over, he slowly turned his head to peak at the figure.
It was a boy, a boy no older than 20.
The boy spoke "Hello my Name is Nate." Master Quatarr slipped something out of his pocket he hadn't used for years, a Jedi's weapon.
Nate spoke ounce again "Are you a Jedi?"
Quatarr was silent then he turned away to admire his lightsaber. "Yes what does it mean to you?"
Nate: " We are forming a rebellion to stop the Empire."
Master Quatarr: "Against the empire."
Quatarr felt sick, confused, lonely.
Quatarr is lost and now staring at the boy.
Quatarr finally collapsed and laid against the fence and concentrated, he was now unsure of what to do.
He thinks hard and remembers Order 66, and it finally occurred to him he had to say......... Yes.
He leapt up to his feet and drew his lightsaber and said "I'll help."
A rebel Sergent arrives at the scene after a long hike from the shuttle.
Rebel commands Quatarr to pack up.
Quatarr did it immediately and grabbed his belongings and grouped them together into his backpack.
Rebel to Nate: " He looks pretty excited to kick empire scum."
Rate and Comment "Thank You"
Great job, dude! I love the photoshopping effects, and the storyline so far seems good. This is something I look forward to seeing more of. And I think it's great that you are writing the story almost like it's a mystery.
Like Moodswim said, I like the mystery thing! Well written. He reminds me of my jedi Qazar, cuz the name sounds the same, and they have the same head. Thought mine has blond hair. :P Awesome series! Can't wait for the next!