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Star Corps #1:The begining
Hello. My name is commander bly. I am in charge of star corps. Now i will tell you the story of my brave men and the battles we faced. This is star corps.
About this creation


Commander Bly's men taking out a small band of rebels.

clone: Die rebel scum!

rebel soldier:ahhh!!!!!!

sniper: carefully curefully.
clone under sniper:just shoot already.

rebel heavy trooper: ack!!

rebel soldier:retreat!!!!

clone shoots at running rebel...

but misses as he runs into cover.
rebel soldier: what should we do sir?
rebel commander:RETREAT!!!!!

The rebels retreat back to their last line of defence...their own base wall

commamder bly:hold your fire men hold your fire.
clones stop shooting.

commander bly and his men walk through the ruins of their enemys.

commander bly:we out number you and out gun you. surrender now and I will have mercy on you.

rebel commander: NEVER!!!!

the clones and the rebels open fire on each other.

rebel soldier dies.
rebel soldier:ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!1

sniper open fire on the rebels

he misses... but destorys the thing that guards the rebels liquid tabanna.

the sniper shoots the liquid tabanna...

taking out the rebel base and knocking out the officer.

the rebel commander gets up.
rebel commander:uhhhhhhhhhhh my head.

the rebel commander gets the officer and drags him to his ship.

as the commander gets the officer in ship he starts to wake up.
rebel officer:uhhhh



the rebel commander starts up the ship

as the ship takes off, a clone throws a homing beacon on it

the homing beacon is safley on the ship

commander bly: is the homing beacon on their ship
clone: yes sir
commander bly:good they won't get away next time.



Please tell me if you want your sig fig to be in this comic in a comment.

P.S. THE CLONE LYING DOWN IN THE LAST PIC IS NOT DEAD. I JUST FORGOT TO PIK HIM UP.THANKS.



Comments

 I made it 
  January 22, 2010
Quoting Nick Axel Awesome!
Thanks:)
 I like it 
  January 20, 2010
Awesome!
 I made it 
  December 28, 2009
Quoting Jacob Semcken Hey man, nice vignette. If you could see my decal, can you comment on it.
thanks and sure:)
 I like it 
  December 26, 2009
Hey man, nice vignette. If you could see my decal, can you comment on it.
 I made it 
  October 18, 2009
Quoting Brig. Jake (aka-recon 1-11) sweet!:)
Thanks!
 I like it 
  October 18, 2009
sweet!:)
 I made it 
  October 18, 2009
Quoting CC-1792 Commander Trixe Cool but you should have made at least one clone die but still it's pretty good nice job oh and I would like to be in the comic.
ok I already posted number 2, but anybody wants to be in it will still be in the comic so you will b ein number three. i think about 5 or 6 clones die.
 I like it 
  October 15, 2009
Cool but you should have made at least one clone die but still it's pretty good nice job oh and I would like to be in the comic.
 I made it 
  September 27, 2009
Quoting joe pags cool
thanks
 I like it 
  September 27, 2009
cool
 I made it 
  September 27, 2009
Quoting Elite Arc Commander Rhino CC-731 pretty good sorry for the wait there are alot of people who want to be in it even my sister so i,m trying to make all the figures it should be up this week
cool wait your sister. is she goin to be a clone? either way thats cool. anyway the next comic takes place on brigde on no other than mygeeto. i'm just finished the bridge and i'm waiting for my sister to finish her custom clone. so it'll probley be out around the time yours is done
 I like it 
  September 27, 2009
pretty good sorry for the wait there are alot of people who want to be in it even my sister so i,m trying to make all the figures it should be up this week
 I made it 
  September 27, 2009
Quoting Elite Arc Commander Rhino CC-731 hey torch chould I be in it and i,m making a star wars group do you want to be in it
sure i already have your fig made thats why i asked if i could use your guy for a comic.hows yours coming along.and yes, i would love to be in your star wars group.
 I like it 
  September 27, 2009
hey torch chould I be in it and i,m making a star wars group do you want to be in it
 I like it 
  September 27, 2009
hey torch chould I be in it and i,m making a star wars group do you want to be in it
 I made it 
  September 15, 2009
Quoting DarkKnigt88 U.N.E. Tech Commander Cool story, do you have the rest or at least the next few parts thought out? Oh and I know you obviously didn't mean for your pix to come out that blurry trust me no one does but perhaps you should work on that seeing as though you have everything else dowm perfect.I may upload my sigfig soon, I'm not sure because its only done with sharpie and it doesn't look that good compared to a lot of peoples sigfig clones.
thanks. if you want i will add your sig fig in the comic even if it is made out of shriape.
 I made it 
  September 15, 2009
Quoting Commander Chris Cool. Its a good start.
Thanks
 I like it 
  September 15, 2009
Cool story, do you have the rest or at least the next few parts thought out? Oh and I know you obviously didn't mean for your pix to come out that blurry trust me no one does but perhaps you should work on that seeing as though you have everything else dowm perfect.I may upload my sigfig soon, I'm not sure because its only done with sharpie and it doesn't look that good compared to a lot of peoples sigfig clones.
 I like it 
  September 14, 2009
Cool. Its a good start.
 I like it 
  September 14, 2009
Cool. Its a good start.
 I made it 
  September 12, 2009
Quoting Bailey 37 nice 5/5
Thanks!! check back for number 2
 I like it 
  September 12, 2009
nice 5/5
 I made it 
  September 11, 2009
Quoting commander ford very cool :)
Thanks!! Check back for number 2.
 I made it 
  September 6, 2009
Quoting Ginny Hardin good job for ur first 1.
Thanks!!
  September 6, 2009
good job for ur first 1.
 
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