Quoting Juan Carranza
It's a bit short, the concept reminds me of Exo-force, you know moutain split in two joined by bridges... You have too many custom clones, don't get me wrong I like custom clones but if you're looking for a legion color etc. you should keep one uniform and not exactly interesting color scheme, I personally prefer the color=rank order,(green=sargeant, blue=liutenant, red=captain, yellow= commander) but you should only customize high ranking clones and your sig-fig, the story needs some work you need either action or mistery.
Here me out. Commander Gree's Green Company troopers have green on them. And this is more then a one part story. It's going to be long. In the CW series the troopers aren't colored by ranks. Some of them aren't even colored at all.
