this new version of whirlpool fits in the story line like going in bed whatever that means he was kicked out of the black fantasy for stealing a magma jewel he was found by magnus 7 and was helped to find the tritams matima crystal that turned him into a super whirl pool and wants to get back in to the black fantasy with the help of magnus 7 he'll be back
Like Sky said, the blurry picture and the quite messy background detract from what seems to be a decent MOC, with an original head. Try to visit the pages of other builders, and see what they do. You'll improve quickly. Keep it up!