Not taking them on the floor would have been nice, and posting them in a bigger format too (there are size options in the photo uploading window). Again, well done (otherwise I wouldn't have come back here to see it again and I'd have never seen your question lol).
Quoting Yuri Fassio
I must say I really like this. Probably one of the best 10 pices MOCs so far ever. I was a bit disappointed in the presentation: this was worth more of an effort in shooting and posting. It's a 3.
Out of curiosity, do you have any tips on how I could have bettered the pictures?
Okay, I applaud you for building a working flashlight with only ten pieces, but now you've got to think about the right way to present it and if there is anyway to improve the fluidity of the design. I award 2 points to this creation.