My entry for the 2010 Moc Athalon in Post Apoc...enjoy :)
About this creation
It is hard to believe that it has been three months since the collision with Venus. The horror on that day is indescribable. So many were killed...The world doesn't need any more death. The War of Mankind, or WWIV took care of that. It is impossible to look upon that war and see any reason for it. It makes you wonder if humans even deserve to live.
As you must know by now, the collision caused by the pull of gravity on our two planets caused the end of Earth as we know it. The catastrophe destroyed most of what was left of Earth's population, annihilating civilization. It divided our world into two fragments, shooting one piece towards the sun, and the other toward the neighboring planet, Mars.
As our world was obliterated, fragments of Venus buried itself into the rubble of Earth. And with it, a heinous creature. The ungodly monsters start small, but envelope there victims in repulsive masses of flesh and blood. It makes me queasy to even describe. In other animals, they will mutate the prey, causing it to enlarge and repopulate like mad.
There numbers are revoltingly increaesing so much each day...
Even with our greatly improved war-machines...
powerful guns and weapons...
and the Government's new Black Saws...
too many people are still perishing before the wicked masses.
We are trying to save as many people as we can, but our efforts seem futile. We lose more friends, more brothers and sister, every day we are on this God-forsaken rock.
We try to make shelters from what is left of our war-torn planet...
We try to busy ourselves and get our mind off what is happening...but we always return to thoughts and actions of bloodshed and carnage.
Many are beginning to go completely insane...
while others have gone down that road many months ago.
but as the strife continues, mankind is coming to horrific end...
My name is John Florrence, and I fear that this is my last message.
Nice creation Josh. While the story is a bit out there, I think the build is what counts most and you did great with that. Don't worry about Kieth, his head is easy to hurt. Hopefully the good Docter will be kind with his judgment. Good luck with him and I can't wait to see what you have next!~H
If he didn't do the math, thats scary 0_o. Any ways cool creations, i can always go for a post apoc. I love the chaos in this MOC, and that black saw helicopter thing is really cool, even though it wouldn't be able to fly with those :P
Quoting Keith Goldman
Score of 2. That story made my head hurt...The Earth exploded and then there was a war and then Jupiter and then...a score of 2. The build was mildly interesint, I liked the gore effects, but overall its a hot mess.
Well, it's better than a 1...yah, sorry 'bout the story: I was trying to come up with something somewhat original. Well, thanks for judging!