Nice work E.K.O this is cool! I'm impressed with the amount of work that you put into it but I don't think it looks exactly like a battle pack would. The speeder should be closer in the picture and the background doesn't look like one on a set would.
This is very good for a first-timer like Flare said, I would like to see a picture background and possibly some description on the front of the package 4/5! *Edit: 5/5 I didn't see this was in Paint, I use Photoshop so this is way good with paint! Keep Building!
If you could rebuild it on L.D.D., I think they give you the option of buying it, and it comes in a nice little set. But then again, I'm not sure it is star wars. Great job though, Paint takes a LOT of time. ~Waff
cool, do you have photoshop? if so, you could have put a layer over the pic of the star wars lego box of whatever place you wanted, then just erase the parts you don't want so you can see the bottom layer, (the actual lego box) making it a bit more realistic. other than that, this is well done!