My first attempt at black fantasy. Contest Entry: Unpiloted Category 13/20
About this creation
Beware the Sower of Discord, who plants seeds of Doubt and Strife,
which corrupt our souls, destroys our lives, and desolates our homes.
The Sower spews hateful words like fire,
burning us until we catch ablaze with the same anger and hatred,
directed now at those we care about, our friends, our loved ones.
But more should you beware the seeds the Sower sows,
for though they may start small and harmless enough,
they will grow and fester, spreading their infection,
until they solidify into Bitterness,
corrupting our hearts and blackening our souls,
isolating us from the ones we love,
trapping us in darkness and suffering as we become empty shells,
leaving nothing but destruction in our wake.
The Sower of Discord
A flier that spreads the infection by dropping "seed" pods that contain the infection that will become the Solidity of Bitterness.
The Seeds of Doubt and Strife
The "seeds" being sown.
The Solidity of Bitterness
A major contagion that looks like a cross between a dog and a hedgehog. It roams about, infecting at its touch.
Notes: Don't be too harsh. I've never done this kind of MOC before. Just thought it'd be fun.
3 pts. I would love to score higher, because the creativity is definitely there and your presentation is one of the best I've seen in the competition thus far. But this is your second entry, and it just wasn't complex enough to get a 4. Still, excellent work.