Needs way more work. Does not look anywhere like Al. I love Hagane no RenkinJutsushi (FMA in original Japanese), and I know what I am talking about when I say that does not look like Al. Al is not a good choice to make as a minfig.
Ughhh... Al is dark gray/ grayish blue. He's taller than average (about master chief sized) and his entire chest is rounded, not just the middle. Looks more like a knight who put a sloping 2x1 on his chest.