wow i like it. maybe a little more folage would be good but you wont lose points for that because i know it can be hard to find alot of it. i might have to borrow this idea for something im working on. dont worry, i'll give you credit.
You would have a great depiton and there is a reminiscene of kinds of Sci-Fi movies. If you would like to show Your Own Creation more high quality, at first, you would take pictures more clearly and you should set large plain paper or cloth on those background.