Nektann:Errgh! Why did Mata Nui have to make such mess in here.
Skakdi: Uhh, because he did?
Skrall 1: Of course that's what he did, moron!
Skrall 2: I still don't know why we're here. Why would we want to return to a world shaken to its destruction?
Nektann: Because we are returning to the rest of my troops on the island of Zakaz. If we want to conquer this new world, we're gonna need more than four men.Now let's move.
Skrall 1: I sure hope you have a plan to get there quicker, cause at this rate it will take years to get there.
Skakdi: Uh..rock here. Uhh rock there. Uh rock ..Whoa!
Skrall 2: We have no room for clumsiness, pinhead, so shut up and hurry up.
Skakdi: Uh..Whoa cool!! Shiny toa mask.
Skrall 2: What!? I already told you to stop fooling around or we'll leave you to play with your little mask!
Nektann: Wait you fool! Show me that mask!
Skakdi: Uh..here, you see it now?
Nektann: Of course I see it! And if I'm not mistaken, this is the legendary Mask of Time.
Skrall 1: What are you talking about?
Nektann: This is the mask of time, it has the power to stop time, go forward in time, go back in....Wait,back in time! Men I think that there is no need for us to return to Zakaz, because... wait, did you hear something?
Ta Matoran: (thinking)The Mask of Time! I better tell the nearest toa about this. And that Toa would have to be Toa Amtrox!
The matoran runs back to Amtrox and explains the situation to him. Amtrox has been on a mission to rescue survivors of the earthquake in the Makuta robot, and it hasn't been too exciting. Amtrox jumps to the idea and speeds toward the villains. With all his Toa power, Amtrox takes down the Skakdi and both Skrall with ease. But than Amtrox looks up.
Nektann: It's too late, fool, I am going to change the past to make way for my own future!
Nektann jumps through the portal.
Amtrox: Not so fast ,monster, you aren't going anywhere
At the last second, Amtrox jumps through the closing portal.
nice I like that cool effect for the portal it would be nice if the future installments where in full screen affect (I don't know what the heck to call it) and I was wondering how do you put pictures on your home-page
AMAZING IDEA AND STORYLINE WISE, COOL EFFECT PORTAL....WILL DEFINITELY SEE THE REST SOON AND I GOTTA MAKE MY STORY AS GUD AS YOURS (MINE SUCKED :( ) :p BUT THIS IS COOL AND I LIKE THAT YOU MADE THEM "SWEAR" BUT YET SUITABLE FOR KIDS. CREATIVE CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE REST!
Quoting AMT Guardian of Earth
great job. im thinking of making this a serial for my page too since i have amtrox and i helped come up with the story, but only if you say i can since it was originally your idea.
Why of course! After all, you helped! So I look forward to seeing your versions.