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Reign of War: Toa Aura Entry 1
Cast for Entry 1: Toa Aura Created by Gringat the Repungant Queen Ocuro Stage 1 Created by Ethan Dunne Sparx Created by Ethan Dunne Gringos Created by Ethan Dunne (Only pictured) Venba Created by Ethan Dunne Croll Created by Ethan Dunne (Only mentioned) Helix Created by Ethan Dunne (Only pictured) Xion Created by Ethan Dunne (Only pictured) Audience Created by Ethan Dunne (Inactive)
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Prologue

I am Aura the Toa of Gold I am one of the only Toa known to have the Midas touch. I remember little of my past life as a matoran except the fleeting memories of a matoran I once loved on Poliaz. I do not even remember how I became a Toa all nkown to me is that not a single person with a shard of greed in their hearts that will sacrifice the moment to capture me. I have been on the run from one of these tyrants one known as the shadowed one a destructive, violent and horrifying criminal who seeks economic relief among communism, destruction and slavery.


Entry 1

“This is just not my day, ha Sparx?” I said just as minion one of the dark hunters was rushing towards me.

“This is the day you return to the shadowed one and this time he won’t be so merciful apon you!” Minion announced. I waited just for the right moment and tore of my lead plating for one final attack. Just as Minion was reaching for me I leaped at him and kicked right through his enormous hands.

“Gahhhhhhhhhhh!” He screamed. Just as he fell to his knees I landed another blow to his left leg. Then I ran as fast as I could before minion fell to the ground and just as I turned away from his body a figure appeared in front of me and I slammed right into it and blacked out.

“Unghhhh.” I got up my view blurry but returning. I looked up and saw a dark sky surrounded by trees and life only lit by a light coming from a flame on the ground. I looked around to see a small campsite with a medical hut and resting huts like the one I seemed to be in I saw figures walking around the site they seemed to be preparing for battle with swords, guns and armor. I got up to look around I walked out of the candle lit hut and all of the figures eased a grin to their face as one specific figure stepped on to a podium to make a speech.

He began his speech just as everyone began to find a place to sit. “Good evening to everyone as this is a special night. Tonight we have a new ally to fight with us for we now have the help of a very valiant, strong and not to mention beautiful Toa of gold, Aura! As all of us know today is also the day of a very important event for today we will strike down General Croll’s army!”

Everyone replied in a cheer of happiness, “Hurray!” The candles dimmed just as the figure walked down the steps of the podium, but before they dimmed to much I got a look at him. He looked very limp and his body was very skinny. He wore silver armor decorated with medals of all sorts, his body was covered in silver armor from his shoulders down to his ankles and his feet were plated in some sort of lead colored plating but I couldn’t see clearly, and his face was scarred and he had no mask he resembled a mask less Toa. I watched him make his way towards me he held a strange; almost fake smile across his face as he walked towards me.

He told me, “Good evening, it seems you had a good rest.”

“Who are you? And where am I?” I asked.

“Oh, forgive me I forgot to introduce myself.” He introduced himself, “I am Venba.”

I was shocked, caught in disbelief,”I know Venba, I killed him. He was a criminal after my abilities, he was a horrible person.” Then I realized, “Gasp! You’re only after my abilities!!” I ran off I didn’t know to where but I knew I had to get away from the camp. Then I was stopped by a tall, ominous figure.

“And where do you think you’re going? Hmmmmmm?” It asked in a slurred feminine voice.

Then I was caught off guard it lashed out at me and I screamed out in pain. “AAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Then I became dizzy and fell to the ground and blacked out.


To be continued……….


Status:I am going to add more pics in the next week but first I need to rebuild the MOCs



Comments

 I made it 
  July 20, 2010
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant I'd try posting them on DeviantArt too. That place has tonnes of Bionicle Fanfics on it, and it's my plan to put my storyline there. And you can add a link on your MOCpage to DeviantArt/YouTube too, obviously. :)
I'm too young and I as going to post my stories on youtube and my website: www.bioniclegadgets.webs.com
  July 20, 2010
I'd try posting them on DeviantArt too. That place has tonnes of Bionicle Fanfics on it, and it's my plan to put my storyline there. And you can add a link on your MOCpage to DeviantArt/YouTube too, obviously. :)
 I made it 
  July 19, 2010
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant Aura has been disassembled since I posted her page, but if you're clever about it you should be able to remake her. She doesn't have a custom torso, which should make it easier. It's Toa Nokama's. And the story is looking rather good so far (although I'd focus a bit more on describing the scenes, and making sure your grammar is 100% correct) The only thing is that this doesn't fit MOCpages' rules. None of the pictures are of your MOCs, and this is in danger of being deleted.
Yeah I expected that so just in case I Keep all of my serial entries as word doc.s so that I can upload the text on to youtube
 I like it 
  July 19, 2010
Aura has been disassembled since I posted her page, but if you're clever about it you should be able to remake her. She doesn't have a custom torso, which should make it easier. It's Toa Nokama's. And the story is looking rather good so far (although I'd focus a bit more on describing the scenes, and making sure your grammar is 100% correct) The only thing is that this doesn't fit MOCpages' rules. None of the pictures are of your MOCs, and this is in danger of being deleted.
 
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