on the industrial plant on the planet ilison the CG have attacked darx's weapon facilty in sector m they have attacked with all there might now the darx elites have been called in to counter attack the attack
This may not remain in the CG. I suppose technically it follows the rules, but then again, the rules state to make a good MOC. Not that this isn't good, but you hadn't spend a lot of time on it by the looks of it. Besides, even though the rules don't state how to make a CG minifig (which they soon will), you still need to keep the CG soldier look. CGs have crimson helmets (more specifically Lego motorcycle bike helmets), and almost Clone Trooper looking chest armor. And the ONLY way a CG doesn't include all crimson, is if it's a higher-ranking soldier, in which case would include blue strips.