Here, Ahota and Bastilla converse with the Jedi Council on Dantooine. It is decided that you are to become a Padawan (without your opinion, of course), and you get a lightsaber. Pretty sweet. Then, they say you have to clense a tainted grove.
The first thing you see on Manaan is a Sith Trooper arguing with a Republic Trooper. Since Manaan exports a healing substance called kolto to both parties, they want to stay neutral in the war. Because of this, there are strict violence laws on Manaan.
Where to begin? I suppose I will start with your use of official Lego Tuskens, then move on to your not even bothering to put any effort into master Vandar, the enviroment suits, andd the starmaps. Most of your scenery needs improvement in detail and realism you should also give your Revan in the unmasking cutscene his hood. Next, allow me to point out that you took Black Rakkatan rather litrally for my tastes. I suppose after that I will comment on your having of Bastila and Revan actually fighting in the dream, becuase, fact both of us know they never touched sabers before KotOR starts. You could do much better if you put more effort into it, as is evidenced by your KotOR 2 vignettes.