We've extended the deadline yet another week since this is the round three only entry thus far. However, I think it's high time I scored this, so I'll give you 4 points for the build, 4 for the photos and 3 for the story. That's a total of 11. If there are no other entries by the end of this week, you will be the automatic winner.
Nice to see someone finished in time for the original deadline. The story could use some work though, I'm not really getting a sense of the characters. Like the last round, I'll judge after all the entries are in, or after the new deadline, the end of next week.