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story of commander thok (pic update)
this is the last known pic of thok in 513 arcives
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born in a lab hidden in the deepest and darkest void in the sea. thok was a genetic expieriment #85 to the 513th. at the time the bionicles where unaware of the base built in there demension, wich gave the minifigs a perfect location to travel into the demension unnoticed. after the first contact with the newly discoved lifeforms. it wasnt long till the cammando toa realized he was just a weapon to the minifigs. during the begining course of the war thok was deployed to many different lands with a rifle that was the first of the bionicle kind, to infiltrait communities blend in and eliminate the leaders of the land as a signal for mech invasion. toas fought the hardest and most died. thok didnt know what he was doing untill the evil energy that is makuta tried to take him over and in his mental struggle he realized he shouldnt be fighting alongside the minifigs but rather on the side of the "enemy". having realized that he had met 3 of the strongest toas in the region and joined there party. always quiet kept to himself, broken and confused about where he came from, he always had conflicting thoughts and emotions. he didnt know how to function as a regular toa, he just knew how to kill. during the mass genocides, him and the slowly growing group would go from city to city fighting off as much infantry mechs as they could. it wasnt untill the leader nui saw his brother hakku get torn apart by the "shinobi" suit in its first particapence in the invasion, that thok realized that the weapons that the toa had needed close contact inorder to hurt the suit unless the weapons shot power from the toa. so thok took his rifle and revese engeineered to to learn how to make more for the group. that day two things happend, the resistance of the cyclo form was formed and a toa name hakanushi had fell inlove with thok. eager to get to know thok, she would fight along side him and talk to him when they where traveling or resting to find out about his orgins. but thok was to scared and ashamed to tell her or the rest of the group fearing that they would kill him in his sleep. thok was a paranoid after what hes been through. after running into a team of jungle recon suits thok decided to go back to that base in the sea and put a stop to this war by desroying the gate that the minifigs where used to passing through. in the days of gathering soildiers wile on there trail he got closer to haka more and more knowing that feeling he has for the day of the "first shatter" wasnt a good one. during the night of the arrival the group decided to camp for full energy of the assault. that night him and haka took a walk to the creek nearby to watch the dragons in the sky and as he held her the conversated about the past and he had confessed to her everything he knew thinking she would still love him. he was wrong, as soon as the sentence was finished the expession on hakas face changed fearing the worst of thoks intentions she ran back to the camp to warn the toas that it might be a trap, that he might be lureing them to the base to collect specimens or kill them all. but when she got there it was too late the sun was just abouve the horison to make the water and land as dark as possible for a few moments giving an aportunity to make there way into the base. she swam after them as thok followed her behind. when they got there thok made it to the hangars first and the group was being conflicted, so thok helped them push the team foreward further into the base so many memorys of his "creation" running through his head with a broken heart led him to not care about his self maintainence and ran out to the portal when it was close by endureing the lazers going through his body, he killed as many as he could before he got to the machine and overloaded his L-80 A-rifle to blow up as he smashed it against the machine. when haka got to the labs she saw thok bringing down the machine and realized she made a mistake when she saw the rifle take a chunk of the machine and horribly injure thok. as she rushed to him one of the suits intercomd "the rift is unstable! its gonna blow!" as the suits teleported home the toas rushed out and as haka was running through the crowd to thok nui grabbed her and told her "its not safe to be so close the blast we dont know what a transdemensional explosion does we need to leave" haka refused to go without him but nui carried her out. when they got back to land all of the ones that survived celebrated except for her. as nui talked to her he told her he knew about thok, he didnt have to tell him he even acted different but he told nui to carry on this message for him right before he charged into the machine and as nui told her what he said deep in the base where thok is lying on the ground he says "i love you" as the rift explodes haka burst into tears screaming "Thok!" "Thok!" "dont leave me!" as nui held her back to restain her from going into the blast. and when the light dimmed the sea level got lower and haka rushed back to the base only to find a giant black creator at the bottom.


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  February 4, 2011
this is epic creation love the steam punkis look ,can you send my somethinh about your group i forget how it could
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