The next installment of the mysterious, and thrilling Zombie Apoc series.
About this creation
Creem Kili- *Drinks the last drops from the soda can* Ahhh, I hope Coca Cola never loses its taste.
Creem Kili- But what kind of store doesn’t have a trash can, or even worse *shivers* a recycling bin.
Creem Kili- Well, with things as bad as they are, the world won’t mind being my trash can.
*Creem Kili hurls the can to the ground and shuts the door without another thought*
*He then precedes to join the rest upstairs*
Creem Kili- What happened to Glen anyway? Hmmm. *thinks a little, but then moves on*
Creem Kili- I guess he is just another casualty to add to my report.
*Suddenly a saw blade taps the window, Creem kili looks over*
Glen Streeter- Hey! Let me in before they see me!
Creem Kili- Glen? I thought… nevermind. Where have you been?
Glen Streeter- Well, we had completed your mission and drove back. When I got out of the car I saw about twenty weird people coming. They had blood dripping from their lips, and walked erratically. So I ran for it, because they saw me.
Creem Kili- You ran away? Why?
Glen Streeter- I thought I’d give them the slip. I lead them away from you guys, also to get them away from me. Tried hiding in a dumpster.
Creem Kili- Did it work?
Glen Streeter- I think, I haven’t seen any of them in a while.
Creem Kili- Alright, good work…
…But who is that behind you?
Glen Streeter- Oh him? I’m not really sure who he is, but he told me to call him Green Man. Can he hold up with us?
Creem Kili- Is he good with a gun?
Green Man- Of course. Got anything in green?
Creem Kili- As a matter of fact we do. Why are we talking, you need to get in, come on.
Creem Kili- So… Green Man, what’s with the get-up?
Green Man- It’s an environmentally sealed, powered, exoskeleton, and it can take a good beating before becoming inoperable. I’ve put it up for sale, so far the US military and the Russians are in a bidding war.
Zombie- Huuurkle, groaaaaam.
Glen Streeter- Um… I guess one of them followed me.
*Glen spun around, bringing the saw blade into a swing*
*He brought the blade down on the assailant’s head, killing it*
Creem Kili- Get in before another shows up.
Get in, let’s go, come on!
*A loud groan emanates from a nearby undead*
*Creem kili takes aim at what he is sure is another undesirable, but lowers his weapon at the Shadow Trooper*
*He then steps in and locks the glass door*
Christian Collins - See anything?
Lewis- Only the dark. I did hear a scuffle, but that may have been a rat.
*The door opens and Creem Kili, Glen, and the new arrival enter. Collins looks suspiciously at the new member clad in green armor.*
Christian Collins - Who’s this?
Creem Kili- Glen found him. He says he is good with a gun, so we are letting him stay.
Max Kester- No, you hang up first.
Tom Foolery- Uh, Max. The radio is off.
Creem Kili- Alright everyone listen up! We need to barricade every window and door before more of those things find out we are here. If they get in here… we’re doomed.
Choices for those of you at the apartment (Remember, ONLY those who are signed up for this series are able to choose what they do.) Also only pick one choice-
A. Board up the window from outside (you will be able to come back inside).
B. Barricade the shop windows.
C. Block the back loading entrance.
to me, by far the best episode! a lot of things were right, experiments with lighting, ambiance, atmosphere, and not too much talk, i loved when the hero walks around alone in the very detailed store and alleys! great job!
green man is a nice aesthetic addition to the team, he looks like he belongs in this universe, just give him a big gun! lol!
Also, I must give you props on the armor details. You did your homework instead of making things up. Don't forget though, that green man is secretly a millionaire. Sort of like iron Man, but not. I figured you could possibly do something to the story with that. Not that you have to, but I mean, ya' know. Okay, I 'll stop talking now...
February 13, 2011
this is easily, one of the best series on MOCpages, this is like the walking dead on AMC (best show ever!)
I like it
General Asher S.
February 13, 2011
This is a near-perfect series! Some advice : Try to make it a bit more suspenseful. That is perfect for Zombie APOC stories
I like it
February 13, 2011
Nice job! I like how you did the bottom floor of the shop.
Lol. Barricades and windows reminds me of CoD Nazi Zombies. *Repair Barricade* *Revive Teammate* and stuff like that. I'd love to make a small cameo. Like, zombies show up in front of the store with some guy taking down a few of them, and then pulling out a frag, pulling the pin, going down, and then people find out it was me. Lol, I am SO narcissistic. And also:
Long rant is long.
I pick B. See, I listen. You know, I did one of these once, and made it completely obvious to pick only one choice and everyone chose like two. Don't people know ow these things work?! 5/5! ~stay green....oh, thanks for letting me in by the way.