"This is one of the best CYOAs on MOCpages! The story is gripping and getting better by the moment! I am always looking forward to the next episode! "-Sam Knavel
"You build great, and you're good at story telling, I'd like your story to end up at Cybercity if possible"-Cyberfrank
"Island Locked is a classic tale of survival. The survivors of a devastating crash must now rely on themselves, as well as the other castaways to stay alive. Each and every one of them were on the plane for a reason."-Eric Mickle.
Those where some reviews of Island Locked
"Wait, tell it one more time, I'm still confused," said Caleb, as Michael finished telling their story.
Michael sighed, and started again.
"Well, when we left, you guys where constantly being attacked by whoever is on this Island. We knew it was too risky to stay with you guys. So we left, and made it look like we where taken. We figured that they would be more likely that they'd attack your bigger group, and get more people.
So we left. But then fruity followed us. We knocked him out, but we made sure he thought it was the other people. From what we hear from you, it took him a few days to get back to the camp.
Well, eventually we found this place, where Maria lives, and she let us stay with her."
"Okay, well it makes sense now," Caleb said.
Sense they had come to the outpost, they had organized the backpacks and canned foods.
They had found a radio in the place as well, and Indiana tried to fix it.
Maria stood at the stove, cooking up food for the four people sitting on the coaches. She was originally the only inhabitant of this long abandoned outpost.
Then Michael, Bob, and soon everyone else
Trulis, the pilot, hacked at the tree with the ax.
Suddenly, someone appeared in front of him.
feeling their presence, he turned around.
"I don't think I've met you,are you one of the people with Caleb?" he asked.
"Yes," the man replied.
(sorry about the mix up, but from now on the pictures go with the words bellow, not above.)
"Oh, good to meet you, my name is Trulis," he said, holding out his hand.
"It's good to meet you, but we must hurry, follow me."
Trulis hurried after the man, leaving the ax.
Suddenly, Dillpickle rounded the corner.
The man swore.
"Who are you?" Dillpickle asked.
"Wait," said the pilot,"Don't you know him?"
Suddenly, the man drew a knife, and slashed Dillpickle's stomach.
"I have no time for this," he said.
Trulis tackled the man.
But the man overpowered him.
Eric heard the commotion from inside, and came out, pistol in hand.
"Drop the weapon!" he shouted.
Athanasios slowly picked up the knife, so the man was weaponless.
Caleb ran over to Dillpickle.
"Dillpickle is injured, it's bad! Get Thomas."
Soon Thomas was there.
They lifted him up, and carried him into the small surgical room.
"Caleb," he spoke urgently,"get Christian, he's a nurse, I'll need his help.
"Christian!" shouted Caleb, looking for Christian, who was in the garden.
Within a minute, they where both changed, and ready.
"We need to get this man into the prison cell."
Eric led the man into that jail.
He shove him in, and locked the door.
"Put that with the weapons," Caleb directed.
"Quickly, get some pain killer and a sedative."
Maria found some, and gave it to Trulis.
Trulis sprinted for the surgical room where he delivered the medicine.
"Bermer, get the Dillpickle changed into something sterilized.
Thomas quickly adjusted the light.
There was also a Defibrillator available, just in case.
Thomas sterilizes the equipment.
And surgery began.
"It's time we had a word with our prisoner," Caleb spoke.
And they walked over to the jail cell. Whatever this man knew, it was valuable. but what could it be?
TO BE CONTINUED!
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Yay, I'm in it again! Actually, to tell you the truth, this isn't a CYOA, because we don't choose anything, only our characters. But that's fine, I prefer it this way. One question though: how did I get there? Was I on the airplane? Or already on the island, and if so, how did I get to the island?
Quoting Michael Kringe
The story is getting better and better! There are so many different aspects which make it exciting and you are really good in creating Lego episodes! You should write a book about this!! ;)
Thanks! And I actually do write, but not about this.