In the Black Temple of the Brotherhood of Red Lightning.
Nexus: Sigh...I-I can't believe he-he's gone...
Nexus: I remember it too well...
On Karda Nui, Catok has been bitten by a Shadow Leech...again.
Catok! Oh-no! Catok, hold on, I'll get some help.
Catok: Help me! I'm-I'm turning into one of theeeemm!
Nexus: *Gasp!* Rorge! He-he's been bitten!
Rorge: He's a Toa, Nexus, kill him.
Nexus: But I--
Rorge: Nexus, we cannot afford to be charitable he's going to die anyway. Kill him...now.
Catok: W-What are you doing!?
Nexus: Wha?...What have I done...
Guard: Nexus, Rorge wishes to see you.
Nexus: Oh, okay.
Nexus: You wished to see me master?
Rorge: Oh yes Nexus, and please, don't call me "master".
Nexus: Did you need something?
Rorge: Yes, Nexus. Are you feeling alright? You've been acting very strange lately.
Nexus: Yes...yes master, I'm fine.
Rorge: Okay, good. And please, don't call me "master". You're like a son to me.
Nexus: Yes sir.
Now the real reason I wanted you here was to send you on an assignment. The Toa have discovered a power source of some kind. Right now, they're in a battle with some Makuta at their base. Sneak in there, it should be easy since you're a Toa to them, and find out what this strange power source is and bring it to me.
Nexus: Yes sir.
At the Toa base.
Brakix: Okay guys! Cut off his retreat!
Cossy: Right! Ha ha! Where you going now you stupid cow?
Brakix: Oh, brilliant.
Nexus: Ha ha! Toa VS Makuta, classic.
Nexus: Now, what's in here?
Nexus: Wha?...It can't be!
To be continued...
Well that's the first chapter! I hope you enjoyed it, this is my first Bionicle comic after all.
Yes, I featured my brother's MOC again so I could use his Cossy mask. :P
Please rate and comment!
Nice! i like how you based it around your 2ndary self moc:D btw, would you mind checking out this?-if you would, tell me if it has potential. Im not tryin to get alot of likes, cause the pics are terrible. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/273279
Yeah, I know, but that's pretty much all you can do with Bionicle. Have you seen Ben Cossy's comic? I couldn't make a whole city like you, especially Bionicle scale. Plus I already have a LEGO system comic going on now. ;)
i like the mechs...but, the scene suffers! that s what i don t like about bios...the scene needs to be enormous! if you d build a small city at least, you d have a decent scene!
it s hard for me to follow the story like it is! would you consider taking your bios to fig scale level? check my story work for reference!
still...your mechs are plenty cool legofreak!!!
#1, Yes, I have most of everything ready for the next one, just got to come over the laziness. #2, Yes, I'll try to get the next one in this week or next week. #3, In this comic? Uh...I don't have you built right now. I'm sore on pieces so no, probably not. :( I can put him in the Galaxy comic though. ;) Sorry bout that.