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Ripping Truths: Part 2
Part 2 of my comic...Caption for each picture is below the photo... Enjoy...
About this creation
Part 1

Last time Nexus was sent to a Toa base to investigate a strange power source that the Toa have whilst Makuta Butcher is ambushing the place.



Nexus: It couldn't be!

Butcher: ROAARRRR!!
Nexus: Agh!


Brakix: It's Nexus! Hold on Nexus we're coming!
Ritix: Mph...give me a boost!

Butcher: Roarr!! It's mine!

Hehe...mine!

Cossy: No!
Butcher: Arghh!!

*BAM!*
Cossy: Aaaa!!
Nexus: Cossy! Agh!

Butcher: MINE!

Butcher: Oh yes, master will be most pleasssed!

Butcher: Mwahahahaha!!!

Nexus: He's getting away!

Nexus: No!

Nexus: Cossy, you can catch him faster than I can! Can you get up?
Cossy: I think he cracked my mask...

Nexus: Then it looks like it's up to me-- Where'd he go??


At the Black Temple of the BRL.

*CRACK!*
*BOOM!*

Rorge: Ah, Nexus, you're back.
Nexus: Yes master-- sir.

Rorge: Well, what was it? Where is it?
Nexus: It...it was the Golden Hau...sir. A Makuta got away with it.
Rorge:...Oh dear. That being in the hands of the Makuta, who knows what will happen.

To be continued...


A new buddy icon...maybe. No, I don't skateboard.

Please rate and comment!



Comments

  June 19, 2011
well i finally get the plot, but this chapter was too short and a little boring, but i know the rest will be epic.
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  June 13, 2011
TELL ME YOUR WHAT YOUR NEXT POST IS!!!!!(cuz you said something in the TFOLPC)
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Caleb S
Oh...thanks anyway. :P
  June 13, 2011
I'm not a big fan of Bionicals, in fact, i hate them. but this is ok I guess.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Yapdap 'Reep' Bitte
Hmm...okay. Thanks.
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  June 13, 2011
Cool, but the couch is too distracting.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
It's just part 3 of this. It's up now. ;)
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Nick Nitro Brick
Ooh! Can't wait!
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Sam H
Sure thing. ;)
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy
Yeah, I probably won't now that I think about it. Thanks for commenting buddy! :)
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
Uh...okay. Can't wait to see him.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Chaos Master
...Gee...thanks.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Shadow Toa
Sure!
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Someone even less popular
Ha ha! No, Tahu's not here. :P
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting wertman 8
They are, technically. They just want to take over Spherus Magna, they don't want to harm anyone unless necessary. I said too much already.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Cody G
Thanks.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Overlord Galaxus ( Instant Noodles)
Ha ha! You know nothing! :P
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  June 12, 2011
cool! can you please check out my self moc?
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  June 10, 2011
cool! in the next chapter of MY story. you disappear! HHAHAHAHAHAHAHA BTW that has something to do with me REVAMPING HIM!!!
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  June 9, 2011
EPIC!!!!!
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  June 9, 2011
Don't change your buddy icon dude, it's epic as is :D Anyway, nice chapter! Great idea for the power source :D And he broke me mask :O I believe it's Makuta smashing time :3 Anyway, great stuff! Can't wait for more :D
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  June 9, 2011
Pretty interesting story you have here, I can't wait for part 3.
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S.T.S .
  June 8, 2011
Nice,and now Destrin is revamped and ready to kick some guys butt "points to Jordan"
Legofreak2444 ~
S.T.S .
  June 8, 2011
Awesome,guess what?Destrin has been revamped and now he is ready to kick someones butt "points to Jordan 2444"
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S.T.S .
  June 8, 2011
Awesome,guess what?
Legofreak2444 ~
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S.T.S .
  June 8, 2011
Since you aren't me ill tell you...Destrin got revamped and is gonna kick someones butt "points to Jordan 2444"
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lone wolf
  June 8, 2011
good story, only wish it was longer :D also neat skate boarder :)
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  June 8, 2011
Oh NO!
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Jan D.
  June 8, 2011
cool story.I love this little board guy:P
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Chaos Master
  June 8, 2011
THAT IS THE COOLEST THING EVER! well, the buddy icon is at least :P
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S. :D
  June 8, 2011
Sweet, can't wait for the next one!
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  June 8, 2011
Could you look at this? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/240695 thanks! ,Shadow
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  June 8, 2011
Class! In the next installment you should have a maskless Tahu charging in and beating the [selfcensored] out of them!
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  June 8, 2011
Quick! Nice, and suspenseful too. Good buddy icon as well!
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  June 8, 2011
nice, i thought that Nexus's guys were villans...
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  June 8, 2011
Cool, very nice!
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  June 8, 2011
Sweet.
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  June 8, 2011
Awesome! Can't wait for more! :D
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  June 8, 2011
At first I thought Catok was in there, but I have a feeling he will show up. Great story!
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  June 8, 2011
Neat skateboard! :)
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  June 8, 2011
Great story! I can't wait for more.:) ,Shadow
 
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