This is a small beach side boat rental place. It's the second building in the Raffornin city on Alta-5. There are quite a few siggys in this so if you see yours and you're offended, don't be offended. I just wanted to include mocers.
About this creation
Ninja warrior 11: Hands up! This is the military, come out with your hands up! This gun is loaded. Okay, you guys, all clear. Ninja Warrior 11
Zac (Hayden): Man that guy is strange. Must've been to many times at the training range.
General Asher S.: At least he does a good job.
Zac: By the way, is that the new police uniform?
Asher: No its a costume from a Halo party. And is there something wrong with your eye?
Zac: Yeah, it's sort of stuck like that. Zac (Hayden) General Asher S.
Eric "Hawk" Mickle: So this place is nice.
Bob: Yeah, the company wanted a nice beachside place.
Eric: So what is this place, a huge hotel, a motorboat rental, a restaurant?
Bob: No, it's a old-fashioned boat rental.
Eric: That's lame.
Bob: I know, and it's our second building in Raffornin.
Eric: At least the beach is nice. Eric "Hawk" Mickle Bob the Almighty
Jake: Hello, I'm the manager and CEO of this small boat operation. We let people sail boats the old fashioned way with sails and riggings. We also own the beach for extra profit.
Asher: Ah yes, there's the word.
Zac: What word?
Bob: We're going to install a camera and we'll see how the first day goes. We'll add commentary and then we'll give it back to you. Jake
Commentary starts now.
Eric: Well that's dumb, their first customer is a fisherman.
The Fisherman: La la la. Oo, it's early still. Maybe I'll catch me a salmon.
Jake: Good luck with that.
The Fisherman: Thanks. The Fisherman
Zac: Who's she?
Bob: I think she's the life guard there.
Bob: Ok seriously, snap out of it. You guys are professionals.
Leda Kat =^..^=: Oh darn, no one's here yet. Oh I hope someone comes soon. I can't sit here too long. Hey Jake!
Leda: Toss me a soda!
Jake: We're a boat rental, not a snack shack!
Leda: Jeez, fine then, be Mr. Bossy. Leda Kat =^..^=
Bob: Oh those must be the new employees.
Ninja: They look sketchy.
Asher: I agree.
Eric: Oh shut up you two, how can you be sketchy with a smile like that. Oh and Zac, is your eye okay, because it's been shut the whole time.
Zac: You know what, just shut up.
Eric: Well, sorry.
Jag: Well, this is a depressing first day. I woke up at 4 in the morning just to stand here on this boardwalk.
Areesta C: Oh come on, this isn't that bad. Look at the nice view.
Jag: Since when were you the optimist.
Areesta: I don't know. Jag Areesta C
Eric: Oh look some swimmers. Finally some people.
Ninja: Eww, they're all fat!
Bob: And you had to point that out why?
Asher: Oh my god you're right. Eww. Can you see through your one eye Zac?
Zac: I.... will...... kill...... you...... all.
Ben (Flare): Oooh, this feels nice. Darn, now that I look at myself, I feel like I should've worked off the Applebee's Chicken.
Doog: Oh shut up, you're making me feel bad.
Ben: That we both didn't work off our fat?
Doog: No, you got to eat the Applebee's chicken and I didn't.
Ben: Oh. Ben (Flare) Doog Chicken
Eric: Oh my god!
Asher: Ahhh1 How'd he get there!
Bob: You mean the beach patrol guy?
Eric: Yeah, he's that idiot cop, Chris Phipson.
Ninja: Looks like all he's doing is hitting on the life guard.
Asher: That's why I fired him from the Police.
Chris Phipson: Hey there. You want to try my segway?
Leda: Go away.
Chris: Hey, don't be so pushy.
Leda: I'm leaving now. Chris Phipson
Zac: Finally someone with a decent body and nice personality.
Eric: Oh look and he's eating a banana. See there are some normal people out there.
Ninja: Wait, he just threw his banana away. What's he doing?
Bob: Oh, he's not normal, he's eating the banana peel.
Cyberfrank 2010: Oo, yummy peel. I love the ripe ones. The others are just too hard or squishy. Cyberfrank 2010
Asher: Who's that angry guy?
Bob: I remember him from somewhere.
Zac: I think he's the supplier of the tanks that are blowing up my warehouses!
Eric: You guys, that's Christian Collins.
Bob: Oh, that guy.
Christian Collins: *mumbles* darn tanks. stupid malfunction idiot 5 stud wide turret. Arghhh! I blame Command Center 5. I have to go back and build the Panzer myself now. Christian Collins
Bob: Whoa, who's that guy?
Ninja: I think that's an Ewok.
Asher: Only idiots dress up as their favorite game character.
Zac: Say's the one in the halo suit.
Asher: Shut up. Oh wait, your eye already is.
Eric: You two, stop it.
Fisherman: Uh, who are you?
Little Ewok: Yuba Nub.
Fisherman: What'd you say?
Ewok: YUB NUB!
Fisherman: uh great little fuzzy thing. Go run along now.
Fisherman: I can't take your furriness anymore! Little Ewok
Bob: Hey it's my friend Egghead! But who's that with him?
Ninja: I think that's AA (Noname)!
Asher: No way!
Zac: Yes it is, and I know that even with my shut eye!
Egghead Corporations: Hey, can I have a turn AA?
AA (Noname): Just after I catch a view of a shark.
Egghead: Aww come on! AA (Noname) Egghead Corporations
Eric: Woah look!
Zac: Yeah, what?!
Ninja: Tell us!
Eric: It's a zombie!
Bob: No, it's Mr. Bones, sheesh you guys.
Mister Bones: Hmm, I think it's time to go home and build myself an awesome tower. Although this place is quite nice. But darn, there's that idiot cop in front of me. Mister Bones
Bob: Oo look, finally a family for the boat.
Ninja: Let's see them!
Eric: Finally a turn of events.
Bob: Looks like he's ordering a boat.
Mark Kelso: I would like a boat for 4 and I want to rent it for a day.
Jake: Ok sir, just sign here.
Deus Otiosus: Yay! We're finally going on a boat ride!
Agent Annie: And I was like, oh hey you're cute. Then his girlfriend came up, and I was like, aw $#1@. It was totally embarrassing.
Stacy Sterling: Honey, can we at least think over this. I get seasick.
Mark Kelso: In that case I shall buy a bucket. Mark Kelso Deus Otiosus Agent Annie Stacy Sterling
Bob: Looks like Deus really wants to go.
Eric: And the dad looks too excited. I think he might accidently sink the ship.
Deus: Yay! Look at the blue sea! It's so awesome!
Mark: This boat is nice. I'm finally getting a feel for it. This is easy.
Ninja: I think the mom is reluctant.
Asher: I agree.
Stacy: Oh thank you. Is there anyway to cure seasickness? A six month program? Nevernind.
Zac: And Annie looks as if she couldn't care less. She's sitting on the edge on facebook.
Annie: It was like OMG. Then it was like LOL. Then she was like BRB. Then I said oh where do ya think your going? And she was like to go bowling. And then this cute guy showed up and she ran off. And I was like uh-uh you didn't.
Bob: Hey, someone stole the camera!
Eric: Great, we have two buildings and there's already crime.
The whole thing.
The interior of the shack. The green means open boat and the red means rented boat.
End of Boardwalk.
The front sail and searchlight. Steering wheel and life vest as well.
The boat also has a bar with M+ substances.
The Raffornin city council so far.
Asher, Zac, Ninja, Eric, and Me.
Asher: Head of Police
Zac: Head of all Imports/Exports
Ninja: Head of the military
Eric: Mayor (I think)
Me: City ambassador.
The regular photo.
Oh and just wondering, I found some creations I made before moc. Would you like to see them so you can boost your self-confindence in your creations and so you can see how much I've improved?
super scene bob! i really love your pier! and it s too bad i dont see my fig there! although i m sure you must have my face somewhere! since you have so many great fig parts! yeah, i love that scene bob, any boats? the new fishing boat would have been right here! thanks to include me bob!!!
WOW!for a small boat retail this sure is busy,and the everyday life here is hilarious, its great to see an accurate representation of me,thanks for making me funny to,but what's with the eye jokes!its degrading:)
I like it
June 30, 2011
He he he... funny! Thanks for including me!! Great build by the way!
Nice job! I admit, I laughed though pretty much the entire thin("Hey, want to try out my segway?":D).
I like it
June 29, 2011
The rockwork is not THAT bad, maybe a bit of diversity in the slopes (more 1x2 and less 1x3 and 2x3) would help. I really like the bridge. The sail is a bit lame, try more white slopes. I don't like the combination of tiles and studs in the beach, try to make that more studs and less tiles, like in Ben's MOCs.
It seems that the whole MocPage community stumbled into our town of two structures. Good job with the presentation, you made the build look a lot larger than it was. >Eric BTW: Mayor, Un-overthowable overlord, same thing really.