I think my favorite pic was the knife in the throat! For close-up shots, your camera should have a macro setting. It usually has a pic of a flower, or similar. If you fix the fuzziness and add a bit more dialog, you definitely have a winner! Loyal to the Legion!
I agree with Commander Hedzet, I just throw away blurry pictures. Now for C&C (since this is a ML MOC): The good: (1) visual effects. I like the use of the flames and the crystal. (2) The story. It's interesting, but a bit undeveloped. As a reader, I want to know what's are these plans. Is this some sort of super-destructive weapon? A military vehicle that you're going to build later? Maybe battle plans, or perhaps because of the bad focus I can't see it's a super-important computer chip and not super important plans... The bad: (1) I can't understand what's going on. Write your backstory as if I'm a newcomer who knows nothing about WT and ML. All I'm seeing is "Boom boom pew pew" and "Yay! We got the blur". the odd too-close angles are not so helpful either. Imagine it like you're filming a movie or a TV series. Isn't that a bit too close to their faces? (2) The blurry pictures. Throw them away! The unrelated: I can't criticize the build since I don't see anything. The conclusion: A beginning of an intriguing story, annoying photography, bad narrative.
First of all, I don't need anymore distaste on the pictures. I'll try to fix it. Second, as I said to AA and as it says in the title, this is just a picture TEST for me. I'm not meaning anything by it. It's the capital building from my Galaxy comic. :P
Yeah, I know they're distracting. I'll try to fix that but as I said, I can't really focus on the guy's are and the scene at hand.
I meant for this to be a TEST. I didn't mean to put any story in just right now. This is for future reference.
Thanks for your input AA.
Well Legofreak, this different photo thing intrigues me. I like the moc, but as others have said, it is blurry and seems hard to follow. There are a couple of things that I would like to point out. 1. Why are they in a base? You probably never saw this, but I stated in the group that "We are somewhere in between a militia and an organized army. We have ranks and squads, but no formal military system. We have no bases, so we are moving all the time. This is so the ML hopefully doesn't find us." 2. I am surprised that you haven't added it to the White Tiger's group. Join it here: http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/17624. Thank you and this scouting mission that you caught us in was completely a fluke. Let the Roar of the White Tiger's be heard!
I very interesting idea for taking the pictures :D I love it :D When the first KA-BOOM happened, I thought 2444 would show up XD Anyway, great idea :D May I suggest you take the pictures further back? Not for the fuzziness but so it seems more life like? Sometimes it looked like he was on the floor :P Anyway, great idea :D