Mainly I'd lose the gold for gunmetal grey. I really don't like gold with yellow, and different yellows don't work very well together too.
Also, I find this other headgear I used looks more badass. That's all I'd change.
The rest is a simple old-style bionicle frame with a flexible torso (capable of holding a HF chest armor, I think that detail took more time than the rest combined) and some random details I threw in for good measure like the whip-arm that I wanted to try for some time now.
Thanks Cheesy for giving me inspiration for this quick build, it was a pleasant and relaxing break from the bley stonework for my Samurai Jack MOC (it's small but I just can't make it look right).
I hope you can in turn get inspired by it.
Okay, NOW I'll stop being lazy and comment. I agree with you on two things. The new headgear, and using one yellow. As much as I would like to use the other headgear, because i agree with you in every way about it, the one that I'm using now has gotten so popular, that I couldn't change it. Also, I've had the Idea of using one yellow ever since V4. I just don't have all the pieces. The good thing is, every piece in keetorange that's on Cheesy also comes in yellow. I'm almost there. The only thing stopping me is a bricklink account.
August 17, 2011
Oh and about my first comment, I was just frustrated with my computer. Nothing too bad.
Quoting Cody G
I love that torso! The whip arm is very good too, very SED-like. The one thing that I would improve on this is the gun, I never liked the HF gun piece. Gunmetal guns are ironically difficult to build.
I agree. Cheesy Q made a far bett gun out of that same piece. But understant that once I had the head and one arm finished, I had pretty much made my point, all the rest was simply there to fill in the mOC :)
Quoting Cheesy Q
That's really unique, and definitely not what I was expecting. I'm going to comment tomorrow when I'm not in such a bad mood. I don't want to get kicked off.
Sorry to hear that, I hope it's nothing serious.
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~
Sweet cheese! Yeah, the gold and duel shades of yellow don't really go together very well. You're going to be getting a lot of "what could make my Self-MOC better?" questions now. :P
I don't mind, as long as people don't ask me to build them. I don't have that kind of building time on my hands.