"I hear him...... he calls to me from so far away......... master." Long ago when nightmare king ruled Cora Magna their was a toa revolution to try and free the people from nightmare king. The leader of the resistance was named Midnight toa of Nightmares. During a battle Nightemare King himself captured toa Midnight and, brought him back to his fortress. Using his nightmare powers Nightmare King Mutated the toa into a creature of of terrifying power, and unspeakable evil. the beast was half toa half nightmare wolf, Nightmare King was very proud of his creation he named it Nightfang. After the imprisonment of Nightmare King, all of his powerful allies where either imprisoned or killed. Nightfang was entombed in a massive temple in the Mega desert because though it deserved to die the high toa council of Cora Magna still saw traces of toa Midnight within. hoping one day to retrieve Midnight from the jaws of the beast which now controlled him. but during a tragic event on Cora Magna that wiped out all living beings, the temple sank into the desert and no one ever saw it again. It was dark and dead silent nothing stirred in the lost temple, but a pair of orange eyes flickered to life in the dark. "I sense the great corrupter,"said a deep growling voice, "he calls to me but i must not obay his call, he made me kill all i loved and then rewarded me like i was a hero, but the urge is to strong i must not GIVE IN TO THE BEAST..... RRRRROARRrrrrr." Chains rattled and stone started to crack the sound of the beast grew and grew until the chains holding him to the prison shattered. he dropped 40 feet to the floor of the temple. He was unaware that as soon as the chains snapped the temples security system went back online. Three colossal steel statues spit and sputtered back two life and stepped down from their pedestals. the beast now stood in the minor light of the temple confronted bye three massive metal statues designed to kill him if he where two escape. Their was flashes of light and the the sound of steel hitting steel and the sound of metal hitting the ground, dust and sand flew up every where but when the air cleared three massive dark figures lay lifeless on the ground chopped into peaces, and a lone figure was walking away from the carnage. "That is what they thought could keep me in, Hahahaha, pathetic," said the beast. He walked down many dark corridors until he came to a room with blinking buttons and flashing screens. the monitors all flashed the same thing surface, the beast walked to a control panel and pressed one of the dust covered keys and then the temple shook almost like it was ripping apart, all the light flashed off and on and then their was a bright light that flood the temple. On the surface of Cora Magna all was still in the Mega desert nothing moved, and then a massive beam of light erupted from the sand and shot straight into the sky for all to see, then the desert shook and the sound of ancient mechanisms all over the desert activating filled the air, then the temple started to emerge from the sand, until the entire compound had risen from the depths of the desert. The temple which had been lost for eons now stood tall once again in the middle of the mega desert, the temple could be seen for miles around and after the sand settled again, a deep growl emanated from the temple and anyone one around would have run and hid, the growl said one thing, "I'M FREE."
At the Great Tower of the Toa Council in Cora Metru all of the Leader were panicking, "What in the name of Cora was that it felt like the whole planet was shaking," said Grimblade, the ruler of the desert continent Callan staggered backwards almostfalling over but Grimblade Caught him, "Callan are alright," asked Grimblade "I am Fine i just felt a massive change in my home Continent i must see what happened immediately, i will return once i have found out what has happened," with that Callan Burst into flames and where he once stood their was nothing but a scorch mark and a puff of smoke.
suspense...is KILLING ME ! OH LOOK, you posted Chapter 3 :D Going there. Ok but some advice, you do have a great writing talent but it seems a little off with flow. Like how would the narrator know all this ? Well, that doesn't matter, but I mean is how does the narrator know the past of the Wolf guy ? But whatever, great epic story :D