very good cal!!! i feel you re improving a lot on the scenes! now, can i bring one thing to your attention? ...the black of your structure is hurting your scenes, you should tone it down with another color, like white or yellow, i adore the blue and tan mix! the door opened, with controls, are very appealing! when in the black building, this effect does nt happen, otherwise, super episode cal! i love your display of green plates, it looks familiar! lol!!! great work cal!!!
Quoting Caleb Robinson
Lol, try not to correct my grammar on my comments when its on MY page, I don't mind if its on yours.
Cower if you want, but I correct wherever I see the need to. Feel free to correct my pages. If you can find anything to correct, that is. Also; you should read my latest comment on episode one of this season. If you consider it, you may find more people will pay attention to the series.
Nice!!! that was a pretty intense one. I really like how well you're developing the characters before killing em off. Btw you have inspired me to make a Zombie Apocalypse CYOA in the near future ("near" meaning in a year or two). i'll probably start one once I'm finished with my not yet started city. Again, great work, man!!!!
Ohhh I think I'm gonna find my legs! Good episode So what the heck was that thing anyway? A bomb? Airstrike? And its nice to know I'ma haunt those guys nightmares and shatter they're dreams Mwhahaahaha lol.