Greetings! And welcome to my entry page for the final, and most epic round, of the Bio-Cup 2011!!
About this creation
Name: Norenjii
Class: Melee Warior
Weapon: Shinagami Daichi Full-Body Cleaver
Signature Move: Gigablazer Slash
Armor: Samurai Warrior
LV: 694
HP: 2602
MP: 167
Spells: Curito
Abilities: Leadership, Philosophy, Survival
Moves: Slash, Strike, Cleave, Thrust
Backstory: After prevailing in an epice war between the Bio-Nui clan and the Megablokonians, Norenjii formed an elite team from his greatest allies to vanquish all remaining threats to peace and balance on Mata Nui.
Name: Circi
Class: White Mage
Weapon: Brynhildr’s Staff
Signature Move: Elemental Eruption
Armor: Light Mage’s Garb, High heels
LV: 329
HP: 1906
MP: 8460
Spells: Blizzacho, Firacho, Poisongo, Curacho
Abilities: Magic, Whack, Smack, Poke
Backstory: Mistreated as a younger Matoran, Circi vowed to take revenge on all evil. She developed her magic abilities in the caves of Detrahklor, guided by her trusted wizard mentor.
Name: Cid:
Class: Ninja
Weapon: Top-side war Axe, Bare Hands
Signature Move: Paralysis Strike
Armor: Tohkaro Sugie Mahra Battle Linens
LV: 548
HP: 9401
MP: 2823
Spells: Poisona, Esuna
Abilities: Stealth, Assassination, Mysticism, Mutilation
Moves: Jump, Hide, Swing, Creep
Backstory: Cid, a silent and mysterious wanderer who grew up in the shadows stalking his prey, one day realized he could take his abilities to another level by joining Norenjii’s team of magnificent warriors to rid the world of evil…one punk at a time.
Name: D9-T-45 “Slinger”
Class: Automatonic Destructo-Vanquisher
Weapons: Big Gun, Bigger Gun, Really Big Gun
Signature Move: Blitzkrieg
Armor: 12-inch thick carbine-steel plating
LV: 3999
HP: 6452
MP: 2
Spells: None
Abilities: Hypersonic Flight, Hover
Moves: Bam, Big Bam, Bigger Bam, Biggest Bam
Backstory: Crafted by Nynrah-Ghosts, This weapon of war is next to unstoppable. He was purposed to quickly destroy whatever the highest bidder desired at the mere push of a button. Reprogrammed by Norenjii to be a trusted and loyal battle drone.
Name: Fido
Class: Domesticated Killer
Weapons: Armor Piercing Burst-Cannons, Grappling tail
Signature Move: Sniff
Armor: Light Alloy Biotronic Material
LV: 104
HP: 1068
MP: 5
Spells: Retrieve
Abilities: Lightfootedness, Tracking Loyalty
Moves: Scratch, Knaw, Bite, Drag, Sniff
Backstory: “How much is that Rahi in the window?” Raised in a Rahi shelter, he was claimed by the team and trained to become an amazing cyborg rescue hound.
Narrator: Norenjii and his team of heroes arrive at their final destination, the battle plain of Gahran-Thul, in hopes of completing their quest to rid Mata Nui of the last of Makuta’s evil spawn. However, the enemy which they seek cannot be found.
Cid: No sign of any monster up here. No footprints, no nuthin’!
Circi: Oooooh, look at this CUUUUUUTE little flower (Fido growls)
Norenjii: That flower has an ill-favored look about it.
Cid : Lemme give it a weed-whackin’!
Circi: No! It’s not such a bad little flower. It just needs a little love…And water…
Team: Noooooo! Woooof! Bzzzzzzzzzz!
*RUUUUUUMBLLE*
Circi: My bad...
Evil Flower: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I am unleashed!!
Evil Flower: Fools! You are all the same! Cute little flower, eh? Prepare to meet your DOOM!
Norenjii: Battle positions! Hit him with your best shot!
Norenjii attacks! Slinger opens fire! Cid uses Paralysis Strike! Circi casts Firacho! Fido uses Knaw!
Enemy Damage = 0
Evil Flower casts Pollenihilation. Damage to team: 99999
Evil Flower: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Narrator: But wait! As hope threatens to fail our heroes once and for all, from the four corners of Mata Nui, the prayers of those the team had helped during their quest unite as one!
Clockwork Scavenger: Slinger found my lost windup key for me, don’t let him die!
9-Volt: Fido recharged me when I lost power. Re-energize him, please!!
Epic Glatorian: Cid helped me rediscover my nobility, don’t let him leave yet!
Banshee: If Circi dies, my heart will die with her. Let her live!!
Me: Rats, there goes my new self-MOC! We need divine intervention!
Narrator: Together their prayers summon an ancient spell…Resurrectomundo!!
Boing! Boing! Boing! Sproing! Woof!
Evil Flower: Garrrr! I hate that spell! If that’s how it’s going to be, l’ll do what I do best! Eat Heroes! Feed Me Some More!
*Vines grab Fido and Cid*
Circi casts Blizzacho!
*Norenjii uses Gigablazer Slash!*
*Cid and Fido are cut free*
Norenji: Circi, maybe you should try poisoning it!
Cid: Yeah, a little weed killer oughtta do it!
*Circi casts Poisingo*
*Evil Flower: Glurgle, blurble, splutter*
Cid: Uh-oh, this could get messy! Fido: ARF! Slinger: BZZZZZZZZ!
Evil Flower: *Spew*
All: Run away! Run Away!!
Norenjii: Fido, rescue slinger first! We need his communicator!
*Fido rescues slinger from almost certain vomitization*
Norenjii: Slinger, summon help, and quick!
Slinger: **dialing** 773-202-LUNA
Norenjii: Not that number! We don’t need carpet! We need the AZ-2000!
AZ-2000 team: You rang?
Narrator: Our heroes were momentarily spared the gruesome fate of drowning in half-digested hero parts by the AZ-2000 “Grim Sweeper”(and the parts were neatly recycled too!), only to have the battle rage on for nine more months!!
Norenjii: This looks like the end! I’m down to my last HP and I have no idea how much health he has left.
It’s now or never!
ALL: Unity! Duty! Botany!!!! HIIIIYYYAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
Norenjii Attacks! Circi casts Elemental Eruption! Cid uses Single Strike KO! Slinger unleashes Blitzkrieg! Fido uses Sniff!
*Evil flower convulses, flops, and dies*
OFF WITH ITS HEAD!!!
Cid: Did we do it?
Norenjii: Yes. It is finished. We have defeated our foe and have rid Mata Nui of this nefarious evil.
Cid: Good, I need a nap!
Circi: And these heels are killing my feet!
Slinger: Bzzzzzzzzz.
Fido: Woof.
Disembodied voice of Evil Flower: You fools! Do you know nothing about flowers? By killing me you have only succeeded in releasing my seeds to repopulate the entire face of Mata Nui with my children!! HA HA HA HA! Oh, look! Here’s a breeze now!! Muahahaha! It looks like rain!! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!
Norenjii: Doh!
Narrator: So, as we conclude this epic tale, you must realize that A HERO’S WORK IS NEVER DONE!
But wait, there's more!
Name: Evil Flower
Class: Evil Big Boss
Weapon: Its own bad self
Signature Move: Eating Heroes
Armor: Impenetrable spike-spine
LV: ?????
HP: ?????
MP: ?????
Spells: ?????
Abilities: Infectious spores, razor-sharp Leaves, Strangling vine-roots,
Moves: Pollenihilation
Cast shot
G'bye
Fourth wall commentary: I've gotta say, this is not only my longest, most photoshopped post to date, It is also THE most challenging and frustrating build I've ever constructed. I hope you've enjoyed this post, because I know I have. Best of luck to my opponents, and to all a good day.
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April 11, 2013 |
Dumb rating system won't let me give this more than 5 stars.... |
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August 9, 2012 |
COOOOOL. |
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May 10, 2012 |
Quoting Isaac O
EPIC!
Thanks! :D |
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March 29, 2012 |
Quoting L.A. Miranda
Oh man, I wanna be eaten by this Flower <3 I love it!! It's... It's... God, it's probably my favourite MOC from MOCpages. *^*
My, thank you VERY much for the astoundingly nice compliment! I'm very glad that you like it so much :D |
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March 29, 2012 |
Oh man, I wanna be eaten by this Flower <3 I love it!! It's... It's... God, it's probably my favourite MOC from MOCpages. *^* |
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March 15, 2012 |
Quoting Jonathan Rindfleisch
Holy CRAP!!!
Um...erm...thanks? |
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March 13, 2012 |
Holy CRAP!!! |
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January 14, 2012 |
That flower is so epic! |
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October 20, 2011 |
Love the idea! Sweet! Cool! |
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October 8, 2011 |
Thank you for participating on the 2011 Bio-Cup! You got second place, congratulations!This ws a greta entry, and surely shows you deserved to be on the finals. You can find more detailed reviews from the judges on the group page.Thanks again! |
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October 6, 2011 |
HOLY DANDELION! |
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October 6, 2011 |
Norenjii has excellent detail and Circi is one attractive herorine. Brilliant work on the Evil Flower. You know plants can read minds don't you? |
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October 5, 2011 |
A fantastic creation! Those Toa look very great, and this is a very epic giant flower! Nice battle scene, too! |
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October 4, 2011 |
Wow... I have no words.. |
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October 2, 2011 |
Everything is so awesome, all the characters are very well built and the story was great. I think you might win this competion! :) |
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October 2, 2011 |
epic just epic,,the battle and the characters wow really awesone |
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October 2, 2011 |
Great entry like the rest. Among the three I think you have the best story line despite some corny dialogue. Your little shop of horror plant monster has a original design to it although I felt it could have use some improvement in it's arm vines and roots to make it complimentary intimidating to it's massive mouth. With regards to the Heroes the design are quite excellent as well. My problem is I am unable to determine which is the main hero from the rest because they all stand out the same. The pet rahi looks cool as well. Background and pictures especially the battle scenes are while good mayneed some more improvements. In battle scenes, angle of shots are also important. |
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S.T.S The Forgotten October 1, 2011 |
I would say that this is proabably my favorite entry, no offense to the others but this one just really in my opinion just looks epic! :D |
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October 1, 2011 |
Quoting Baron Von Ben ~
Completely and utterly both entertaining and magnificient! I see nothing that could make this better! The script was awesome, the builds of ALL the MOCs are great, and the humor is genuinely corny in the best way. Excellent!!
Thanks so much! The battle style was a tip of the cap to JRPG corny epic-ness or epic corniness, not sure which XD. Glad you liked the MOCs! |
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October 1, 2011 |
I'm not ashamed to say that i peed my pants a little (jk) when i realized that main picture was of the flowers teeth! I think out of the three entries, you had the best monster. Really unique idea. Your heroes all all very nice as well though i feel Clockwork Tempest did surpass you on that aspect. Overall, i'd say you've got a really chance at taking this contest. |
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October 1, 2011 |
Oh My Gawd! I <3 the evil flower! |
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October 1, 2011 |
Nice |
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October 1, 2011 |
I just can't give this a rating that isn't 5 stars. I really like the Bohrok feet leg design on Norenjii, never seen that before.
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October 1, 2011 |
YAAAAHHHH! The awesomeness is KILLING ME! Wonderful job here! The Toas and co. Are awesome, but the flower takes the cake! Good luck! It'll be a tough battle! |
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October 1, 2011 |
Now this should be a Bionicle game. |
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October 1, 2011 |
This is one of those times when you really do need judges to find the better one. I personally think that there are some better building techniques on here than on his MOCs, although I'm less used to your style so more of it's new to me. The flowerhead design is amazing too, and yet so geometrically simple... |
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October 1, 2011 |
Nice idea of an evil plant. I wonder how much force did you use to get that piece into the red HF shield :p |
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October 1, 2011 |
This is so awesome my head hurts. |
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October 1, 2011 |
Just amazing! All of these guys are brilliant! They are all so awesome it's hard to pick favourites :P Anyway, good luck and great work! It'll be a tough one to judge! |
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October 1, 2011 |
wow *jaw drops of*
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September 30, 2011 |
Twice now I've taken the time to write you a nice, detailed comment about this page and the epic MOCs in it, only to have the computer glitch up before I can post it. I've giving up. Just let me say:
-"Unity, Duty, Botany" is the best battle cry ever,
-The builds are amazing, exept perhaps the feet,
-I particularly love the use of Metru heads in the flower and Fido's lanky limbs and feet,
-The RPG stuff was great,
-I'm glad you built the puke instead of photoshoping it,
-These are epicly brilliant MOCs with a page to match,
-I think you're going to win.
Oh, and have you ever played Super Paper Mario? It's kind of RPG style and has a flower boss too. |
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September 30, 2011 |
that was amazing! the storyline is so creative...and humorous! great job on the construction too. that flower is unbelievable! |
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September 30, 2011 |
amazing im about speachless when all the heros died and how you showed previous creations umm i guess you would say praying them back to life was especially great and how you used your previous biocup entry to clean up the mess afterwards i would say more but theres just too many aspects of this creation to put into words right now |
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September 30, 2011 |
Sweet, nice post! Love the giant plant boss... especially because Super Smash Brothers comes to mind... |
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September 30, 2011 |
Completely and utterly both entertaining and magnificient! I see nothing that could make this better! The script was awesome, the builds of ALL the MOCs are great, and the humor is genuinely corny in the best way. Excellent!! |
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September 30, 2011 |
HHHHHAAAAZAAAAAH! TODAY BOTH FINALIST WIN! WOULD THAT NOT BE THE MOST PERFECT ENDING!
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September 30, 2011 |
So by studying plants, the heroes were finally able to defeat the malignant, cheesy-named Evil Flower! The End! I LOVED IT!!!! Although I think some of Clockwork's entries had slightly better builds, I think you may have conquered him in the battle! Incredible job! |
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September 30, 2011 |
WOWZA! The Toa are all amazing and the dog and drone, the flower is amazing! :O It should be a tough call! |
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September 30, 2011 |
Forget the bios... that flower is meanancingly BRILLIANT! |
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September 30, 2011 |
That Evil Flower is incredible! |
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September 30, 2011 |
Great job! I think Clockwork bested you in some areas like some of the toa, and you bested him in other areas like the monster. This will be a really close final... wonder what Monarth will be posting. |
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September 30, 2011 |
The flower? Genius. The new Norenji? Even better. I loved the battle, it was great. The comic relief added so much to it. |
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September 30, 2011 |
*Jaw drops* WOAH. |
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September 30, 2011 |
Wow, that gaint flower is awesome! All of them are great! |
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September 30, 2011 |
I can honestly say I feel like I have been beaten. |
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September 30, 2011 |
SO MUCH WIN! XD man, I laughed a lot at those ridiculous RPG cliches... All the MOCs look fantastic as well! excellent job. :) |
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