Species: Agori of Air
Alignment: Toa Magna, himself
Occupation: Defending Spherus Magna from threats, annoying his brother, Tarvank
Title(s): The "Cool" Guy, Vesh, Toa, Glatorian (formerly), The Kid, The Annoying Guy Over There That Is Really Full of Himself, and many others
Weapons: Venom Staff, Shield/Air Board, Thornax Launcher, His ego
MOC Status: Alive and annoying Tarvank
Story: Veshtar grew up in the village of Tesara with Tarshduk and with his brother Tarvank. He was always annoying to others and always tried to be "cool." He was okay in the arena, but lost more than his share of battles. He has hit on many females of his tribe. He tends to slack off on his obligations often. During the Battle of Bara Magna, he just sat in the village and waited while his brother and many others went off to fight. After one arena battle, Veshtar was brought into a room and handed a stone by the Turaga Galaxy (his brother talked the Turaga into this). After a few weeks, he was led to a temple where he became a Toa. As a Toa, he became very cocky and slacked off even more than usual. He wouldn't do what he was told so Tarvank told Fikar to teach him a leeson. After that, Veshtar does a bit more, and tries to get back at his brother. When his brother was transformed into a Toa of plant life, Veshtar grew very jealous. He continues to mess with his brother, but even more. He helped a part of his share with his team, but hasn't had many major achievements. He now travels with Tarshduk and Tarvank in search of danger. Along the way, he squabbles with his brother and gets into fights with him very often. They are often stopped by Tarshduk, but sometimes he lets them fight until they get tired.
Revamp: Veshatr now has more greebles on him and some minor modifications
Arm, I gave him bracelets for some reason :P
Head, I tried to give him head phones and that's what those gray pieces are
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Veshtar: You feelin lucky dude?
Veshtar: You wanna GO!
Trying to get a date with Vapacia
Veshtar: You wanna go out?
Vapacia: Um, NO!
Gettin shot down as Tarvank calls it
Vapacia: Don't ever ask me out again!
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4th Wall: This was an interesting revamp. I wanted to make him different from Tarvank, but still be able to see that they were related. I also wanted to add things that fit his personality. I think I did okay on that. I added some greebles to his chest and I think it looks good. I also added a bunch of jewels on his body and try to count them all. 1st one to get the correct answer will receive a moderator-ship in one of my groups or get a couple of comments on a moc of their choice.
Thanks cossy! That means a lot coming from you. You may not know it, but I don't have a lot of BIONICLE parts at my disposal. I know this may sound strange, but I am kind of a collector and collect BIONICLE sets and don't really use them for mocs. I know, if I use them I would have lots of parts at my disposal, but I can't really bring myself to doing that. I my turn to bricklink or other part sites for parts in the future. Thanks again for the comment.
Nice work! Love all his greebles :] Anyway, since you asked for advice, I'll give you it ;) Nicely, like you asked. To be honest I've noticed with some of your MOC's that you tend to over greeble it for example on your Self MOC the torso and upper arms are very greebled and have lots of things sticking out. I'd try and cut down on doing that on MOC's. Also, like on this MOC, you've done a lot of system greebles not that, that's a bad thing, it's just I think more Bionicle pieces would look nice instead of them, so that they kinda flow together. One last thing (Hope I'm not being too rough on you) More custom parts are always a plus :) I hope I wasn't too harsh, and I hope I helped ;) If you have any more questions just ask ;) Also don't think I'm saying your a bad MOCist, your not, your good ;)
Its Vental... Oh wait no it's not. Anyway... It's really nice! Love all of the greebles and that thornax launcher is cool! Well, I'm redoing Ventalus's upper legs and adding weapons. Seeing how great and how many weapons you make, any ideas on a good weapon (not a sword...).