My entery for The BIONICLE Torunamocoff round one.
About this creation
SPECIES:Same as Axonn.
OCCUPATION:Former OoMN agent
TITLES:Jeverson, Jev, Snipe.
MASK:Kanohi Kadin Nuva: Mask of flight.
WEAPON/S:Laser rifel, Twin swords.
STORY:Jeverson was a Sniper for the OoMN. But once the Order was destroid, he wandered Spherus Magna alone. after a few years hiding in a cave and shooting any unlucky Rahi for his dinner, a stranger came...
Now on to the MOC.
The back view.
Lower leg greebles.
Jeverson: Meet my friend Shooty
Jeverson: Just when you thought you've seen it all...
BAM! Pop-out wings!
Throughing exploding darts.
Jeverson: Pew pew pew!
I updated Norrak! Lower torso greeble.
And new twin blades!
I hope you liked this MOC, and I hope I get through to round two. =D
Well, this actually is a very nice toa you have here! The look on it is simple, but gets the job done for me. I like how you mixed the blue and silver, but those red pins at the top of his wings are mismatched. To me, he just looks unfinished. From a judges standpoint, I feel like you deserve something in between a 4 and a 5. I'm going to be nice and give you a 5/10. - KP
Quoting 12Lego Greendude
A decent moc. It could use a bit more armor on the thighs and torso. Also the shin armor is a bit awkward :P Color scheme looks good. Some more greebling would have been nice. Score: 4.5/10
Well my brick colection is limeted at the moment because I have like 14 other Mocs built at the moment and I was trying some thing out with the shin armour, as for the lack of armour He's supose to be skinny looking.