Previously- After finding out Denver has been bombed, more bad news follows. WWIII has finally happened, over 90 American cities have been bombed. At first they think their town might be safe for the time being, but they realize that the town is a strategic point and might have trouble sooner than they expected. And on top of their troubles are a group of 10 men, who will soon attack
About this creation
A small town in Colorado in the year of 2015
"So then I was like, seriously?-" Amy was interrupted by someone walking in.
"Hey Caleb, Sheriff's office, be there," said the deputy, then left.
"I'll be back in a bit, see you at dinner!" Caleb said as he left.
¡°What¡¯s the deal?¡± Caleb asked.
¡°We¡¯ve got trouble. Lot¡¯s of it,¡± started the sheriff. ¡°Just got word that there will be 10 or so men coming up here to ransack everything we¡¯ve got. If this happened, we¡¯d be screwed for the winter.¡±
Everyone thought for a bit.
"That was good," Caleb said, "Sal¡¯s gets kinda old when it¡¯s the ONLY restaurant in the town" says Caleb.
¡°Well, they probably need food the most, then weapons. So where do they go first? They go to the grocery store, rob the place in the night, then either head back or go try and ransack the Sheriff¡¯s,¡± Beckmann said.
¡°What¡¯s your point?¡± asked one of the men.
¡°Simple, we set a trap! Make them think they¡¯ve snuck in, then nab em¡¯!¡±
The Sheriff thought for a bit.
¡°It might work; it¡¯d take fewer guards too.¡±
"Sal's get's kinda old when it's the only Diner in town!" Caleb said as he sat next to Amy.
¡°Talk about it! But the town has only like what, 30 people? More like a village!¡±
Caleb laughed, ¡°Good point but-¡° Caleb stops mid-sentence.
¡°Caleb, are you okay?¡± Amy asked.
¡°I think someone is out th-¡°
Just then, four men run out of the small forest and charge at them.
¡°Go, go!¡± Caleb shouts, and they flee the men, the blanket left with food still on it.
Just when Caleb thought they'd make it, Amy tripped.
"Come on, let's go!" he said as he helped her.
He went after her as she ran.
A man tackled him from behind.
Caleb was brought to the ground.
He punched the man hard in the face.
He got up and ran again.
Another man tackled him.
Caleb pushed him off, then punched him. The man fell in the pond.
3 other men followed Caleb, gaining on him.
Caleb punched one as hard as he could.
But was soon tackled by another man (his twin).
And then the butt of a gun knocked him out.
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Soap ` November 29, 2011 |
Can you please not call me "Deputey"? Please? :) |
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| Reynolds Brickfreak November 29, 2011 |
@Soap' You missed the first season of my sign ups. Do you want to reserve a spot in my second season? |
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November 29, 2011 |
Perfect story! I love it! As I have said the story flows right along with the pics! You definitely are improving. It is VERY suspenseful. Great job I can't wait for more! |
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November 29, 2011 |
Very nice! Too bad that I first read episode 5 :( |
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Austin Durick November 28, 2011 |
Awesome!!! I cant wait I want to be in it too! The action is starting up :D I hope if I die I die fighting |
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Dave ' November 28, 2011 |
Wow! |
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Ix:risor (Nate) November 28, 2011 |
Uh-Oh. We are gonna get screwed(but hopefully not). |
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Reynolds Brickfreak November 28, 2011 |
Nice! But when am I going to be in? |
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November 28, 2011 |
Really great cliffhangar! |
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November 28, 2011 |
Nice! |
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November 28, 2011 |
Nice episode. |
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November 28, 2011 |
Awesome episode once again!! |
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November 28, 2011 |
Hehehehe... |
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November 28, 2011 |
love the story so far and how they came at an unexpected time- also lie calebs twin
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November 28, 2011 |
love the story so far and how they came at an unexpected time- also lie calebs twin
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November 28, 2011 |
love the story so far and how they came at an unexpected time- also lie calebs twin
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November 28, 2011 |
Where am I? |
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November 28, 2011 |
awesome! |
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November 28, 2011 |
awesome! |
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November 28, 2011 |
awesome! |
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November 28, 2011 |
Nice, but is it just me, or do some of the sentences look like this (¡°What¡¯s your point?¡± asked one of the men.) Or is it supposed to look like that? |
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November 28, 2011 |
oh, nice episode, nice action! |
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And why am i a bad guy??? |
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November 28, 2011 |
Great Episode! |
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