hello people I'm cool techno mast renewed. i use the google translate well functioning. here i show my great figures is the best wester wave bruno. if i get 50 likes to christmas then I build all your selfmocs. so please, i have also evaluated a comic here. i also want someone that my friend is here to help. i build his figure tomorrow and show them to others and you will also want to build my that.
About this creation
bruno westerwave my selfmoc. his group are the fire fighters.
Look, all i can say really is, its a Breeze figure. The rest arent good with colors, the weapons are big, and you are to harsh and brag about your "Amazing" Selfmoc saying its superior, nothing is superior here, its plastic. Try actually building with right colors and better weapons, then you will deserve 50 likes, i still havent gotten 50 yet.
Well your self moc is just breeze with a different hero core -_- It's sorta unoriginal and probably does not deserve Fifty likes and chances are it may never get it unless you make an effort to improve it and listen to other moccer's advice. For starters listen to the person below me. You could make it more custom and also 'Original' . Try to look at your mocs in a realistic sense and then and only then may you receive those properly earned likes. Hope you have listen to my advice and just understand I am merely lending a hand. :D
These are pretty cool! But, being rude to other people isn't going to make your MOCs recieve more likes. It also states right under the box where you write a comment, "Use appropriate language and do not be mean, rude, or insulting." In my opinion, saying: "Its better than your one" is rude, insulting and mean. Just trying to help you out!
*Edit: Hmm, I misread that comment. You said: "stronger", not better. My apologies, anyway, welcome to MOCpages! Try joining some groups to make your MOCs more popular.
Fairly simplistic builds tbh. Almost stock standard. The weapons actually are quite interesting with the cobbled-together look, giving them an appearance of post apocalyptic scrappings of valuable materials to create something for the explicit purpose of killing another to steal their materials. Like Fallout. ^_^
no the weapons are right so they are cool. also they will win every battle also. and bruno is the best self moc you will see. because everyone here says that he is cool. and he is invincible so he is stronger then your one.
Well the weapons are just... So unrealistically gigantic! If you want your Hero Factory character to win a battle, give him a weapon he can actually wield successfully. Trust me, you can't swing an ace that is three times taller than you and has random spikes covering the hilt. Also, like Vored said, sorry to be harsh, but is Bruno really the best self-MOC around? Take a look at some other self-MOCs, and the feedback they receive.
Umm... okay. I can't give you a like, because these guys have much room for improvement. They all have standart HF bodys, but when you do the color sheme a bit better, that can look cool. The weapons are very, very large compared to the figure itself, and it sometimes seems they are just... made out of random pieces. Improving the photo quality will also help to get this more popular. Sorry for the strong criticism, but I just want to help.