Ep 1- Attack!
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Lieutenant Wallace Charles looked around. After 8 years in the army, and 7 in a intelligence agency, his senses were still strong enough to tell something was not right. He scanned the faces of the other shoppers near him.
There was young woman, checking out…
A middle aged man, looking in the meat department...
A young Asian, checking out the fresh fruit…
That was when he saw him… middle aged, dressed formally, hat low over his face, trying to be inconspicuous in a corner.
Lt. Guy’s instincts kicked into action. He left the shop hastily.
As Guy went round the corner, he shot a quick glance behind him… Yes, the shifty looking man WAS following him. His instincts stll served him true.
Wallace quickened his pace.
And so did his follower.
Guy turned round the back corner, and froze. He was surrounded by men in black. They knew he would run. How?
The Lt. turned around. The shifty looking fellow was now moving in to box him in.
Guy raised his hands, showing he was unarmed…
Then turned quickly, punched the closest person to him, knocking him out.
Wallace then spun round in a roundhouse kick, flooring another assailant.
He then smashed another two,
Before being tackled to the ground.
He then whacked the assailant in the jaw.
And getting to his feet, gave another a hefty kick.
He got to his feet…
And tripped another up…
And headbutted another guy in the groin.
And smashed the final two into the wall.
Guy surveyed the scene before him… His talent hadn’t gone away either… just like the men in black hoped.
Hope you enjoyed!
God bless you all!
Tm
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December 12, 2011 |
Quoting Ru Corder
Not sure why I didn't see this sooner. Great way to start off you series Tim!
thanks! |
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December 12, 2011 |
Not sure why I didn't see this sooner. Great way to start off you series Tim! |
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December 11, 2011 |
Quoting Nicholas Sirica
srry if i seem kind of stupi* im new to moc pages sooo ya know... lol whatchya gonna do? right? we all nooby noobs at one point or another.
I'm basically telling a story in Lego... |
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@Nicholas | Could you please put in some effort to type your posts in proper grammar? On the internet, people look at one's intelligence through grammar. If you tepy liek diz, people will assume you aren't very smart, even though you may be a genius and/or rushed sometimes. |
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December 9, 2011 |
srry if i seem kind of stupi* im new to moc pages sooo ya know... lol whatchya gonna do? right? we all nooby noobs at one point or another. |
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December 9, 2011 |
thankyou :D |
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oooooh then no thanks... im good ited be to much for me to do cause this is my school laptop and i gota work all day in school and yadayada ya i favorited u as a builder and just askin could u check out a "FEW" and comment and dont just say sure and only do one cause alot of people do that when i clearly asked for a "FEW". pleeeeease
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December 9, 2011 |
Quoting Nicholas Sirica
My person? what do u mean in cyoa what is it liek a game? dude ur not explaining it very well
CYOA= Create Your Own Adventure: you choose a character, and during the story, I will give you choices of where to go/what to do, and you choose you own way. does that help? I still have 1 guy that you could choose to be... |
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The One Who Needs Pieces December 8, 2011 |
Hmm... :D |
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December 8, 2011 |
Quoting Nicholas Sirica
have him? what do u mean u would send it to me in mail? if so where is it again?
no, I mean he'll be your person in the CYOA... Quoting Sam Aiello formerly Shy Guy
Tim, isnt the black spy me? #9? P.S U spelled ur name Tm in the end.
ya. there's another spy in black... |
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December 8, 2011 |
Tim, isnt the black spy me? #9? P.S U spelled ur name Tm in the end. |
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December 8, 2011 |
i looked in the sign ups and couldnt find him cause all of them are named -_- u do mean the cyoa sign ups right? |
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December 8, 2011 |
Quoting Nicholas Sirica
so then what is it ur asking people for?
I forgot to mention 1 guy in the sign-ups. he is a spy in black. you can have him if you name him! |
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December 8, 2011 |
so then what is it ur asking people for? |
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December 8, 2011 |
Quoting Nicholas Sirica
are you asking for peeps to send in pics of their custom minifigs>? if so please tell me how to cause i made some awsome custom military soilders with brick arms :D
nah, sorry.
Quoting Calvin Russ
cool but did I make it in the sign ups???
yes. you are #12. |
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December 8, 2011 |
are you asking for peeps to send in pics of their custom minifigs>? if so please tell me how to cause i made some awsome custom military soilders with brick arms :D |
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December 8, 2011 |
cool but did I make it in the sign ups??? |
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December 8, 2011 |
Yeah, it's pretty nice. I take back what I said, I'm in the second CYOA where I don't get killed straight away! Achievement! |
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Dave ' December 7, 2011 |
Sweet! |
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December 7, 2011 |
Quoting LWC guy
Very nicely written, and at last I'm in a CYOA where I don't get killed straight away! Great job!
LOL ya! do you like your name? Lt. Wallae Charles Guy hehehe! |
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December 7, 2011 |
This is really cool!! |
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December 7, 2011 |
Nice, lots of action! |
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December 7, 2011 |
Very nice!Can't wait for the next one! =D |
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December 7, 2011 |
Wonderful first episode! |
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December 7, 2011 |
Nice, but when is the CYOA part coming in? |
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December 7, 2011 |
Woah! He has serious skillz! Great episode! |
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December 7, 2011 |
Woah! He has serious skillz! Great episode! |
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Michael Wilson December 6, 2011 |
Awesome first episode! The action was great! Can't wait for the next one! |
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December 6, 2011 |
that was pretty cool i liked it but what does it have to do with a cold war? lol headbuted in the groin XD gotta hurt. and his facial expression was funny hahhaha but ya it was pretty cool also speaking of episodes check out my battle for sepratists main planet parts 1-5 (theirs going to be maybe about three more episoes) |
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December 6, 2011 |
You should maybe take the pictures a LITTLE farther away so it's not blurry, good job though |
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December 6, 2011 |
That guy is like Jason Bourn II! |
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December 6, 2011 |
Very nicely written, and at last I'm in a CYOA where I don't get killed straight away! Great job! |
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December 6, 2011 |
Nice job! |
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December 6, 2011 |
Great first Ep:P Can't wait for the next!!! |
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December 6, 2011 |
'Just like the guys in black hoped.' Hmmm...sounds like Lt. Guy is being recruited! |
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December 6, 2011 |
This is great! I love the roundhouse kick and all! Keep on building! |
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December 6, 2011 |
Ooooo nice starter! It will be intresting to see what you have in store for the next episode! Great job :) |
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