Well this is my entry to the Self-MOCoff Tournament.
About this creation
ALIGNMENT: Toa, General of Mata Nui's army (formerly)
OCCUPATION: Toa, Warrior, Chick Magnet :P
TITLES: 2444, Jordan, Jordanian Hot-Head, General, Flame
MASK POWER: Mask of Agility, Speed and Water-breathing
WEAPONS: Wrist Blades,
And Lava Axe
MOC STATUS: Dissembled
STORY: Jordan was once a Ta-Matoran from living on the island of Mata Nui.
He always dreamed of becoming a Toa and learning to kick Makuta butt.
Then one day, he found a Toa stone deep inside a volcanic crater,
and it turned him into a Toa.
Thinking the Matoran, not used to seeing Toa around those parts, would mistake him for a monster so he fled to the far side of the island, seeking the help of a Turaga who lived there. The Turaga trained him, and cared for him. Then, when he was skilled with his hands, the Turaga took him to the Toa fortress on Mata Nui. The Toa there were skeptical of his skills but they trusted the Turaga so they put him into more training.
Quickly seeing his skills were more than they had first perceived, the head Toa put him into a special training course for exceptionally gifted Toa. There he learned to fight in the art of wrist blades. He was trained to fight against all odds and to conquer all circumstances, using his wits and strength alone.
"You have been trained alone, so you can survive alone." Said the Turaga who first trained him on Mata Nui. "You don't need a team of six, you are on your own." He then died. Jordan never knew his real name.
He joined the Toa Mahri in a misson(hence is form).
Jordan: Hhmmm, I wonder where Norrak is. He normialy shows up 'round about now.
Norrak: Hey Jordan!
N: Well here ya go Legofreak (and Instant Noodles, Vored, Super Pikmin and Steve), this is My entry!
J: Say, where'd that hottie go?
??????: You mean me?
J: How you donin'?
(sarcasticly) A: Just fine
A: Nobody. Talks. To. Me. Like. That!
N: Don't ya think you punched him to hard?
N: How am I suposed to Brofist him NOW?
N: Works for me!
54, 391st beam commentary:
The reason I made him in Mahri form was because of his feet; they look like flipers. SMT