Joe, Patrick, Malte, Tom, Chinchilla, Nick, Ryan and Marcus: Thanks for your comments, I'm glad you like it :-))
Quoting Ryan Link ... the top could use some work in the rear half maybe, ...
Yes, it looks a little long in the side view because of the cheese wedges on the side. I could try a 1x1 plate instead of the 2nd cheese wedge. It would still look higher than the 1x1 tile and lower than the next cheese wedge.
Quoting DeTomaso Pantera ... the roof seems a little high, through to the back. Maybe lose the studs on the top and you have V1.2 ;-)
I always leave some studs to show that it's LEGO ;-)). But you are right, the postion for them is not perfect on this one. I could place the two studs in the middle of the roof (replace the two 1x3 tiles with two 1x2 tile and a 1x2 plate in the center). - Thanks to all of you for your constructive criticism, I appreciate that! Maybe you'll see a V1.2 soon ... :-))