What a great build. Funny and well thought out. I absolutely love the silhouette shot – very Alfred Hitchcock/Psycho. All you need is the screeching violin soundtrack. Personally I would use that as the main/title photo. Great work Tim and good luck.
That gave me a good chuckle. It sounds quite a bit like Leda too.... If you know what I mean. And I sure hope that she asked for the whole team to get perfect scores. That would include me.:P Anyways, I loved the diologue. And great build. I like how it's shaped like an "M". I wish you luck in the MA (if of course you are participating). Great job!