Great job on this one, I can't really see anything that needs to be changed, overall well done, the knot hole is the only thing I can think of in my opinion, brown would be better than tan. Anyways, keep up the good work!
Nice! Again, it's a small dio like a snapshot or a polaroid photo. Maybe a post card: "Happy Mothers Day form the edge of the Republic!" The focus and lighting are good. I agree with Patrick: the tan knothole would be better in brown, and I agree with you: The bent paper background is a bit of an eye catcher, but cool, you already know this. Oh, and I like the simple barrier you built for these guys. Easy, not over done. Attack!
I like it
May 13, 2012
Nice job! The little stone wall thing is a nice touch.
What is Good?
I really like the barrier design and the landscaping is very good. The tree design is very realistic and i like the way the layers of leaves build up
What could be improved?
I feel that the tan technic 1X1 brick in the tree looks a bit out of place, maybe replace that with either a Brown or Dark Brown 1X1 piece.
Suggestions For Even More Improvement:
I think that the only thing missing from the creation is a base which would add detail to the creation. I used technic grey brick for a base in this creation: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/312268 or another good base technique you could use is the ones in Deff's creations like the 1X1 bricks with the stud on the side.
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