Ok so the 4th mission is in the planet Balmorra. I didn't knew enough about Balmorra to build so I made some research. I know the planet is in the Star Wars the Old Republic game which I have but I got it 1,5 weeks ago so I'm not enough high level to survive in the Balmorra. So I went to youtube and watched some videos about SWTORs Balmorra. It looks like where ever you go, there is some rocky cliffs so the landscape is mostly cliffs and plains there is also a lot of parts from old ships. Well back to the moc.
About this creation
"Log 4 - Jedi Order"
-- After our disappointing defeat on Endor it is time we turned our attention elsewhere. The new Emperor is taking his anger out on the people of Balmorra we cannot let this continue. Good luck to you all." --
Log of Bobus Flackloaker: --"I was sent to scout while council members saved people from slavers. I took one trooper with me. We headed to the plains. There was a lot of parts from the old ships. We heard some movement so we went cover behid the cliffs. I climbed top of the cliffs and the trooper followed me. We saw three sith's troopers walking towards the ship "graveyard" They vanished quickly. I bet they have a some kind of base or bunker in there. But there might be a lot more troopers so I go report for the found first. Bobus out!"--
Bobus and trooper
Part of the old ship.
This is a decent first entry. The old ship part is very good, but the landscaping is not. It needs more detail. The cliff also looks very artificial, a larger variety of slopes would be good. Your score: 5.9/10