The Draxon, en-route to Raxus Prime. One week after the events in A Galaxy Divided 5.
Nat: "I'm not complaining General. I'm just saying there are lots of Jedi here. Is Raxus Prime really that important?"
Harash Soru: "Its not the planet Nat, its the location. Whoever controls Raxus Prime controls movement in and out of this sector."
Their conversation was suddenly interupted by the appearance of the Commander.
Commander: "General, can I have a word?"
Harash Soru: "Oh, of course Commander."
Commander: "I'm sorry about the way I've been acting General. It has not been productive."
Harash Soru: "Do not worry Commander. You are a Clone of Jango Fett, it is only natural you show some of his defiance."
Commander: "Thank you, sir. I just assumed that like everyone else you would treat me as a Clone."
Hara patted the Commander on the shoulder before walking away.
Harash Soru: "This army consists of men, Commander. You may be grown in a vat but you have displayed more courage and loyalty then any other soldier I have met. The Force truly is with you my friend."
The Commander watched Hara walk slowly away.
Commander: "Thank you. My friend."
I short while later Hara begins addressing the gathered Jedi.
Harash Soru: "Junta Ra, you will lead the space assault along with Padawan Crike Cenubie. Master Doskey, you and Cammo Kolun will join me on the surface."
Ian Doskey: "Excuse me Master Soru! Is it not up to me where my Padawan goes?"
Harash Soru: "Of course Master Doskey. But your Padawan is the second best pilot we have, he will serve Master Ra far better than he will serve us."
Crike Cenubie: "You do me honour Master Soru."
Ian Doskey: "The decision still rests with me. I will allow you to go Padawan."
Ian Doskey: "Dam Soru. He thinks he can interfere wherever he wants!"
Junta Ra discretly shook his head in disapproval of Ian.
Junta Ra: "Come Padawan, lets go take a look at your ship."
The Draxon broke out of hyperspace and the battle began. whilst the starfighters distracted the Separatist fleet, streams of Gunships swooped down towards the surface.
Raxus Prime, the junkyard of the Galaxy.
Harash Soru: "By the Force this place stinks."
Nat: "I swear we get the worst jobs."
Ian Doskey: "I thought there were supposed to be droids here?"
Harash Soru: "Be patient Master Doskey. We..."
Clone: "Look out!"
A small missile flew through the air and exploded in the piles of junk, sending metal and Clones alike flying.
Cammo Kolun: "Ah, the welcoming party."
Ian Doskey: "Attack!"
The Jedi launched themselves towards the small droid force, hacking away at the metal soldiers.
Cammo Kolun: "Well that was easy."
Harash Soru: "Don't get overconfident Cammo, it..."
The Jedi spun around to see a Clone disappearing in the acid river.
A tall figure stood amongst the junk.
Figure: "You should not have come here."
Ian Doskey: "Who are you?"
Figure: "I am Tred Core, and this is my domain. Leave, or die!"
Harash Soru: "Master Doskey, take the Clones and carry on the mission. Cammo and I will deal with this."
Ian Doskey: "Very well, Master."
The two remaining Jedi jumped over the river and approached Tred Core.
Harash Soru: "Tred Core. The name sounds familiar."
Tred Core: "It would! I was a Jedi. I fought in the Battle of Geonosis."
Cammo Kolun: "You were a scout! The first sent to Raxus Prime!"
Tred Core: "Yes, and I crashed here and the Order abandoned me! The Dark Side helped me survive! Now you will..."
Tred suddenly grunted as a large peice of metal struck him from behind.
Fayla Hawow: "Oh do be quiet fool! You, Soru! I come with a message from Count Dooku."
Harash Soru: "Speak your message assassin!"
Fayla Hawow: "The Count wishes to meet with you in three weeks on his home of Sorenno. You may bring one Jedi to accompany you."
Harash Soru: "And if I refuse?"
Fayla Hawow: "We both know you wont do that Soru."
Harash Soru held the Dark Jedi's gaze for a long time.
Harash Soru: "Tell the Count I accept."
Suddenly Tred Core lept to his feet and charged Fayla.
Tred Core: "Insolent woman! This is my planet, you do not dare attack me!"
Nice chapter! You chose a great setting for this episode!
Mymanpequin1 <=John Black
May 17, 2012
I am gasping and cannot close my mouth cause of that green commando ima make him . To Do List: Slap Brother, Eat a whole burrito and make atomic bomb, make Green Commando,Slap brother again.
Hey is it ok if i use last pic on my page(one with gunship)
An excellent chatper! Lovely fight scenes and a great overall chapter ;) I do however still feel that the endings to your battles could use some work, maybe the sith retreating by making a run for it and jumping into a ship while still battle Soru or something? Anyway other then that, AWESOME work ;)