YAAAAY! She has upgrades AND a story!
About this creation
Name: Mira
Gender: Female
Element(s): Fire (very weak)
Mask: Unknown
Weapons: Sword
Race: Ta-Matoran
Species: Toa
Bio:
Mira never knew her parents, and was never liked by the other Matoran in her village. Her armor was silver and red, instead of the usual orange or yellow. She was also the only female Matoran in the village, and was always picked on by the male Matoran for being different. So she decided to leave the village, and ran away into the nearby forest. After two days, she ran out of supplies, and was completely lost. While looking for food, she fell into a sinkhole and was trapped there for almost a week. Fortunatley, she was found by an old Turaga named Olnaro, who lived in the forest, and was nursed back to health. The Turaga told Mira she had great potential to be a Toa, but he never told her why. He gave Mira a Toa Stone, and began training her. She learned some martial arts and swordsmanship, but the Turaga died before he could teach Mira to use her elemental powers. On his deathbed, he told Mira that she had amazing power, but was unable to tell her why. Mira burried the Turaga, gathered some supplies from his hut, and headed into the forest. After three days, she discovered a Makuta base on the border of the woods. Mira attemped to spy on the base, but was kidnapped by Makuta scouts and taken inside. TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Well, here she is! Now with a better story and a better design! BTW, I like the simple design better because it looks smoother and more feminine. Remember, no greebles for FeMOCs (unless you're Dewan!).
Oops, I almost added some pictures with Dragonax in them! Sorry, you'll have wait untile my b-day to see his upgrades!
Head design belongs too BioRockDude, waist design belongs to Adam Toh.
You can probably guess what happens next in the story, but I ain't gonna' tell you!
And incase you didn't read it, here's an overview:
Mira is an orphan, her parents had some secret she never learned, and the secret has something to do with Mira's "Great Potential".
Check back soon for more MOCs involved in Dragonax's story, and watch out for my new story, "Redemtion"!
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November 7, 2012 |
Quoting Makuta Blackwing
are you gonna make a video of redemption?
also, what characters, other than your own, are you gonna include?
I might do videos for parts of it, but the main story is written. And I'm only using my characters for now, but I'm going to try and use other people if I make a sequel :D |
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November 7, 2012 |
are you gonna make a video of redemption?
also, what characters, other than your own, are you gonna include? |
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June 23, 2012 |
Nice job! I too, commonly use Rahakshi heads on my mocs. You used them nicely here =) |
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May 27, 2012 |
I don't know what it is about simple, rahkshi-headed MOCs, that looks so good, but you pulled it off wonderfully! :D |
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May 20, 2012 |
Quoting Cody G
Not bad! I've seen the HF armor used on Mata feet like that, but never actually used as feet. Haha nice work!
Thanks! |
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May 20, 2012 |
Not bad! I've seen the HF armor used on Mata feet like that, but never actually used as feet. Haha nice work! |
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May 20, 2012 |
Quoting Voxumo The Reality Walker
wow i love the use of chains as hair. The way you also incorporated hero factory pieces. also i must ask how you were able to out those hero factory 2.0 armor on the feet. that is an interesting concept and one i would like to use if you gave me permmision.
Thanks! The HF armor on the feet is attached using an exo-force robot hand/claw attached to the rod on top of the foot. |
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May 19, 2012 |
wow i love the use of chains as hair. The way you also incorporated hero factory pieces. also i must ask how you were able to out those hero factory 2.0 armor on the feet. that is an interesting concept and one i would like to use if you gave me permmision. |
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May 19, 2012 |
Quoting The Phantom
Nice moc, way better than V1. I like the body and legs!
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May 19, 2012 |
Nice moc, way better than V1. I like the body and legs! |
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May 18, 2012 |
Very nice moc you got here! I love all the chains for hair. And while your right, the smooth look is more femine I think I pulled my female moc off pretty well with some greebles lol. |
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May 18, 2012 |
Nice updates! |
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