Nexus: Hold on Weasel, we’re almost there!
Nexus: Ah…we are here.
Nexus: This is the place…bring the mask Weasel!
Nexus: Place it here.
Weasel: Shouldn’t you do it?
Nexus: No…no, I can’t. Just place it right here.
Nexus: Muahahaha! It is time!
Destrin: Steady men…
Destrin: It is time.
Destrin: Go Makuta! Charge! Be freeee!
Makuta army: Yaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!
Destrin: Quickly! Through the portal!
Jordan: Going somewhere?
Destrin: Out of my way Toa, or I will strike you down where you stand!
Jordan: I don’t think so.
Destrin: So be it! Attack!
Destrin: You are a fool Jordan!
Nexus: Ah, Jordan. I was expecting you would try something like this. So valiant, yet so foolish.
Jordan: We’ll see who’s the fool when I get my hands on you…
Nexus: Ah, yes. I suppose we will.
Destrin: No! You can’t-
Cossy: Hello, “brother.”
Jordan: Nexus, there’s still time to stop this.
Nexus: No there isn’t, your efforts are brave, but irrelevant.
Jordan: Have it your way…
Jordan: You’re a demon Nexus. You will pay for this.
Nexus: It is probably true, I am a demon.
Nexus: But there is more to me then meets the eye, as I am sure it is with you, Toa.
Jordan: Enough riddles, you’re not going to get away with it this time!
Jordan: You cannot win Nexus; I will not let you!
Nexus: Then die!
Jordan: These gloves weigh me down, I must take them off!
Jordan: Let’s try this again!
Zam: How we doin’!
Whiteout: Not so good, they swarm like a bunch of Scarabax!
Krizan: Come on!
Ossum: They just don’t die!
Tank: Bring it-
Makuta: Weak Toa!
Krizan: That does it.
Marra: It’s a Spintar!
Marra: Heads up Ossum!
Destrin: You could have joined me Cossy! We could have been Makuta together! Instead you chose the path of the hopeless!
Cossy: I’d rather rot in this pit for the rest of my days then join you, traitor!
Destrin: Haha! You are-
Jordan: It’s over Nexus.
Nexus: Yes, yes it is…
Nexus: …For you!
Weasel: Ooooh dear!
Nexus: Die Jordan!
Jordan: That was not just lightning; you wielded Shadow! What’s happened to you?
Nexus: I think you know Jordan. When I came to the Underworld, I was taken to Teridax himself. He gave me a proposition, if I would do something for him, he would give me my freedom. He had power enough to send just one person to world above and it could not be himself, for he was yet physically weak from his battle with Mata Nui. I would have to go to Spherus Magna, acquire the Golden Hau, and open the portal to the Underworld, which the Great Beings built during the war of the Element Lords. It was originally to be used to bring back deceased Baterra. But they later found out they could not bring back robots for they had no souls.
Nexus: I took the offer. He sent me to Spherus Magna. But not as I was, he infused me with his own powers. So I am now hosting the power of Teridax. And once we take care of you Toa, I will return to him and he will have his strength back!
Jordan: …Well I’m not going to let you get away with this!
Whiteout: Dang, that Spintar’s really causing troubles!
Whiteout: What was that?
Whiteout: Alright, I’m taking out the Spintar…
Zam: C’mere you!
Bogi: More chains, Jube! More chains!
Jube: Ya, shut it! I’m a-comin’!
Jube: Look out Bogi!
Ossum: Come on you!
Krizan: Hold him still Zam!
Cossy: Whew…is that all?
Marra: I-I think so…
Ossum: Hey, is it just me or are these bodies…moving?
Whiteout: Hey, Tank, get up, we gotta get out of here!
Krizan: They’re alive!
Cossy: Let’s go!
Cossy: Move guys! Into the portal!
Cossy: Move, move!
Marra: Let’s hurry it up! The Makuta are getting up!
Cossy: Alright! You go Krizan, I’ll hold em off!
Jordan: Go Cossy! Close the portal! I’m right behind you!
Cossy: Weasel! Remove the mask, only the living can touch the mask! NOW!
Weasel: Yikes! Okay!
Jordan: I’m coming-
Ossum: Put them mask back in quickly!
Cossy: …I don’t think we can…
Ossum: There must be something-
Zam: No…I-I think…I think it’s over.
Jube: Well ain’t that sad?
Jube: Sigh…come on Bogi, let’s go find Lumpy’s body.
Jube: Yo, Weasel! Ya comin’ or what?
Whiteout: Come on, Tank, let’s see about your leg…
Ossum: You coming Cossy?
Cossy: Yeah…yeah, I’m coming.
Cossy: Good bye…brother.
Over time, legends are forgotten. Over time, Memories fade.
And over time, things that should not be misplaced are lost.
It's amazing how similar alot of you're ideas are to mine. Great minds think alike-ish? Fantastic, You have a good bit a talent,I could use a story writer like you in BIO2013,Would You like to join?We'd love havin ya on the creative dream team of deadly epicness!
Quoting NoWhereMan .
Wow. great story. very well written. I noticed you said that you could email Shadow Toa. Would you mind asking him If I could us Kumare in my story. hopefully he remembers that character.
I'm sorry if this sounds mean/rude/whatever but:WHAT HAPPENED TO JORDAN!?WHY DIDN'T THEY SAVE HIM!?WHY WOULD YOU KILL YOUR OWN SELF-MOC!?:(YOUR SO EVIL!?:(
p.s.Once again didn't mean to sound mean.Who is the hand.When will the next story happen?THE SUPPENCE IS KILLING ME!
I like it
May 23, 2012
Iron man is your new Self-MOC. Jordan 2444 is finished. :) Revamp time! :D Wonderful episode. I loved it. ;)
I like it
May 23, 2012
Awesome ending, and is that a sneak peak for a sequel?
I've been following this story from the start (which was before I got the pages), and I must say, it was a very good ending battle!!! Kinda depresssing, but all very good!! I'm guessing this was a follow up to ripping truths?
That was a fantastic ending! I really like how you made the fight with so many enemies, and the story has it's conclusion... even when it's not sure what happened to Jordan or Nexus. Fantastic work! And the Epilogue makes me being exited of what will happen next...