OK! So welcome to the first episode of the first season of my first Avengers series. Play the music along with the episode, it adds to it. You all know enough about the chracters for this to make sense right? Anyway, here...we...go!
Shield Helicarrier, New York City, 26th May 2012, 1800 hours
"You know the situation. We've got three government sponsored aid-workers being held hostage by insurgents in Pakistan. We believe that the Pakistani government is responsible, however, we don't have any proof." Nick Fury addressed those who were gathered before him. "If we go in there guns-a-blazing we could risk an international incident." Replied Steve Rogers, better known as Captain America. "I know that. We can't authorize a rescue mission without clearance from Pakistan, and they won't give it." Fury continued. "We need to get those civvies outta there, but I want to know if the Pakistanis are harbouring these terrorists, so here's the plan; Captain, I want you to lead a UN task force to get those poor sods out. Widow, Hawkeye, I need to know where Pakistan stands on this. Get me the info I want. Dismissed."
UN Camp, Karachi, Pakistan, 26th May 2012, 2300 hours
Captain America stood before a squad of SHIELD troops, posing as UN. "You all know your roles?" A smattering of nods. "Good. We move out at midnight."
The team moved silently through the desert sand. "Get into positions." Ordered the Captain. Men rushed into various places around the outside of the terrorist base.
"3. 2. 1. GO GO GO!" Explosions rocked the walls and the terrorists awoke to find guns being pointed at them.
An AK-wielding insurgent burst out in front of Cap, and fell with a shield to the face.
He spoke into his radio. "The gate is ours. Have you secured the hostages?" "We're pinned down by the building we think they're in!" Came the reply. Cap glanced around and saw an old motorbike. He smiled slightly.
Two soldiers were ducked down behind some rock. Bullets tore at the ground around them.
Cap zoomed past on the bike.
He jumped off as it sped into the window, and exploded in a ball of flame. "I really hope that didn't hit the hostages!" Said one of the soldiers as they rushed into the building.
Inside Cap was already mopping up the stragglers.
One of the aid workers rushed up to him. "Thank you! Thank you!" he cried.
Cap spoke into his radio again. "Fury, we're done here. Just awaiting pick-up sir."
On the bridge of the Helicarrier, Nick Fury had just received the news. He switched radio channels. "Natasha, you're good to go."
There you have it folks! The first episode. More of a war episode than a super-hero one, but thats how I want this to be.
A good story but I agree the main picture needs changing! haha And I must admit, the effects could do with some work too. Spend more time on things. Don't rush them. Other than that, good stuff.