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Pirate: "Get up!"

The pirate was holding Crike's lightsaber.

Pirate: "I said get up!"

Crike slowly got up and tried to force his lightsaber to him, but the pirate held it tight. One of the other pirates lunged forward and zapped Crike with his shock whip. Crike yelled in agony and was taken in the prisoner room. The one pirate took out his comlink, and contacted their leader.

Pirate: "We've caught the Jedi. We are putting him in the prison cell.

Pirate leader: "Good."

Ian jumped into the room.

Ian Skywalker: "Yes, very good."

The pirate put his holoprojector away

Pirate Leader: "You fool. I will destroy you!"

Ian Skywalker: "Handover your weapons and no one gets hurt."

Pirate leader: "No."

Ian let out a blast of electricity onto the unsuspecting pirate. The pirate threw his vibroblade at Ian stabbing him in the leg. Ian let out a howl of pain. He ripped the blade out of his leg and fell onto the floor, blood dripping out of his wound. Ian was tired. He was weak. Something was taking over him. He looked at the vibroblade and saw a poison injector on the side of it. He activated his comlink, calling for medical help from Zor. The pirate kicked him and beat him until the Jedi was too weak to even stand up.

Meanwhile, Zor was just getting Ian's distress call. He immediately sent for reinforcements. R7 looked for a bacta patch. He chirped in disappointment, finding no bacta.

Crike was tied up in a dark room. He slumped onto the ground. He had been caught by a simple band of pirates. He was feeling like he had failed. He was hoping that Ian would find a solution. Suddenly, he heard a roar.

Crike Kenobi: "Who's there?"

He heard it again, understanding wookiee language.

Crike Kenobi: "What is your name?"

The wookiee cried out in his native tongue.

Wookiee: "I am Zike, son of Clack."

Crike Kenobi: "Zike?! This is Crike! Crike Kenobi! Remember old pal?"

Zike: "Oh. It is you! Good thing you are here. Do you have reinforcements?"

Crike Kenobi: "Ian is our last hope"

As Crike said this, the doors swung open and Ian was dragged inside.

Crike Kenobi: "Now what are we going to do?"

Zike: "Have hope. Someone will come."

Ian groaned and Crike rolled him onto his back. Ian was unconscious, and he laid there like a dead animal.

Zike: "Ian needs medical help. Do you have any bacta?"

Crike Kenobi: "I have one small injection we can give him."

Zike: "Go for it."

Crike placed the bacta patch on Ian's leg. Crike had been a close friend of Ian's for a long time. He had to help him. They had gone on many missions together, and were a great duo. Zike reached for his bandolier, and pulled out a capsule with a liquid in it.

Zike: "This will help Ian if he becomes conscious."

Crike Kenobi: "Zor is our only hope!"

Mysterious voice: "You will have no hope soon!"

A pirate walked into the room, in the outfit of a clone trooper.

Pirate: "He, is about to be deceived!"

The pirate left the room. Crike was worried for Zor. He couldn't help thinking about what would happen if they caught Zor too. That would be simply dreadful. Zike whispered some words of assurance to Kenobi in his native tongue.

Zike: "Zor will be fine."

Crike Kenobi: "Thanks Zike. I am just really worried."

Zike: "So am I."

The pirates were all dressed up in the white armor from the clone troopers. One was an ARC Trooper, but the rest were dressed up as standard phase 1 clones.

Pirate: "We will be rich after selling these Jedi to the sith. We will be given great honor."

A different pirate: "More like infamy."

The pirates left on small pods from their ship. They clambered aboard the republic ship, and then acted normal walking into the cockpit. Zor didn't turn around. The pirates aimed their blasters at Zor waiting for him to react. He stayed still, and so did the pirates. Zor then jumped up , his green blade ignited.

Pirate: "Oh hello general. We didn't know it was you."

Zor Ember: "Good. Because now you follow me!"

He mind-tricked the "clones" to follow him and obey his words.

They got on to the other ship, and the pirates were waiting for them.

Pirate Leader: "Oh good, you brought him alive."

"Clone trooper": "He was very strong."

Pirate Leader: "Execute him now!"

The pirates disguised as clones pulled their blasters on their leader.

"Clone trooper": "I'm sorry sir, but you have been deceived."

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--Finally, I have no school! I can work on more episodes. Please let me know who is following this series by commenting. Thanks!--


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  July 18, 2012
Crike is to.
  July 12, 2012
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  June 27, 2012
Cool !
 I made it 
  June 25, 2012
Quoting Timmy Sterkel EPIC!! Can i have a sig fig?
Maybe. Describe him first and I'll think about it. (I'm sorry it's just I already have a basic storyline type of thing) First off, he can't be grand master, or leader of the Wolfpack. Second, he may not be a very important character. Tell me about him anyways though, because I may use him.
Zor Ember
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Bluethorns (John Henry)
  June 24, 2012
Nice Episode!
Zor Ember
Bluethorns (John Henry)
  June 24, 2012
Oh and your Sigfig is out, Here he is:
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  June 22, 2012
Very good one!
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  June 21, 2012
EPIC!! Can i have a sig fig?
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  June 21, 2012
Nice, I like the figures :)
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  June 21, 2012
Very good episode!
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