Hello peeps, I'm being Overactive again with Another MOC! This time it's a revamp, of Cilla, the Toa of Water. This one also features a complete Bio, which I have not had yet for this MOC! Enjoy!
About this creation
Tools: Water spear, Kanohi Faxon; mask of kindred
Personality: Cilla, In truth, was never ment for battle. She is polite and considerate, but she is inexperienced.
History: Cilla was a Matoran living on Racta Magna, who at one point helped to hide Rugaki, the "daughter" of Aroxion, from a Dark Hunter named Sohbec, who had been assigned to kill her. As a thank-you, Rugaki transformed Cilla into a Toa and offered to train Cilla, and she accepted. During her time with Rugaki, She had met another renagade Makuta named "Light Aroxion". At one point, after delivering a message to Raxonax, Cilla ran into Sohbec, who had forgotten about their past meeting and was under different employment. He tried to kill her in order to stop her from informing Raxonax about Shadonax, but failed.
A while later, Cilla found a Toa named Montu and invited him to join her group. Cilla soon began to realise she had feelings for Montu, and confessed this to him after she saved him from the clutches of a parasite called "the Leech."
The four of them lived happily in the ancient city of Nolybas, until much later, when Makuta Soldok and Makuta Bestox of the Sombrak entered and engaged in combat with them. Cilla and company were winning, until Bestox stabbed Rugaki in the heart and killed her. "Light Aroxion" also seemed to be struck down and killed, forcing her and Montu to retreat. They met with Toa Parah and Toa Galika and moved into Racta Major, where she found that "Light Aroxion" was still alive. Cilla then accompanied Galika and retrieved the Elemental Staff of Water from Bestox, who had stolen it from Rugaki. During this battle, Cilla cut off Bestox's right forearm. Cilla, gathered with the rest of the Toa at the gates of Racta Major and battled the Sombrak here. Cilla battled Bestox again here with the help of Galika. Bestox killed himself by lunging himself head-first down a steep ditch after attempting to lunge for Cilla.
After the battle, Cilla discovered that "Light Aroxion" had perished in the battle. She and Montu decided to remain in Racta Major, mourning the loss of both Rugaki and "Light Aroxion".
An overview. The first ever virson of Toa Cilla (Not including the Matoran Version I made before I even had MOCpages) had white on her, so i thought I'd re-introduce that colour scheme :D
Legs. Same as before, but with different thighs and no white.
Body Design. No longer rotateable. I like the design I've made, but I think the frame is too wide. Is this design ok? leave your opinion in the comments section ;)
Left arm. Sorry for the blurry pic :P
Right Arm with spear.
Face. Like da horns?
Cilla and Montu, Back to back.
Fighting with "Light Aroxion".
That's All from this MOC folks. Shall I show you my next post?
BTW, It's Not a Visorak :P
Quoting Nik Brusk
Awesome moc! is this a version of my older bro toa electroid's moc? cuz his is the same name, same element, and same mask.
Thank you, but I'm afraid the fact that my and Electroid's MOC are similar is pure coincidence... This was a MOC that I had came up with before I came to MOCpages, but it's not suprising that the MOCs are very similar. The mask and element are typical for these kind of MOCs, but the name I guess is freaky coincidence. I will check out Electroid's MOC though, for curiosity. Thanks for the comment, Nik :)
Ok, the reason why the waist is like that is because I used up all the pinholes with armour on the back and connecting the vahki piece and the rest of the body. I'll try to fix the legs and the feet are just metru ones, not custom. But thanks for commenting and the cc! :)
Sorry that I don't give you a "like", but there are many things on this creation that need improvement in my opinion. The upper custom body is good this way, but the waist... it's so very thin that it don't need much power to break her! The upper legs are also very thin, try to put some armor here and make her hips wider. Maybe even take the bulk from the lower legs away. The custom feet are nice, however. I hope that I could help!
Quoting Marko Petrusic
Really good MOC, I like the color scheme, reminds me of Hahli Inika. The only thing I don't like is the shoulders, too bulky for a female MOC, and you should shorten the neck just a bit :)