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About this creation's here..........the begining of my new story in the 2nd era.............awesomeness......

First let me say this was hard work with editing and posting the pictures and posting Chapter 1, because I made Chapter 1 very long to get through all of the begining of the story. So I hope it's not too long for you, and I hope you enjoy all of the story!


Ragorok finally did it....he made a time machine to go back in time and recruit Blacklord before he made suicide with Arfell to wreck havoc to the world and conquer it. Luckily, Bonax had aid from his friend to assist in biulding a top-notch airship that would take him to Ragorok's Island and cease his cruel plans. However, entering Ragorok's territory was harsh in a way............

Bonax: Dude, I can't wait for him. Is he ever going to be done?

Chuvil: Just relax. He'll get it done.

Bonax: What if he doesn't!? What if Ragorok already-

Chuvil: I know he didn't do it yet. Otherwise it would be the end as we speak.

Trust me, he'll get it done.

Bonax: ........Well fine.

?: *Ahem*

Bonax: You have it done?

Astronomus: Correct. Now both of you, come with me.

*They walk*

?: *sigh*

Astronomus: Solarin!

Solarin: !?

Astronomus: Have you programmed the airship?

Solarin: *nods*

Astronomus: Excellent.

Bonax: Not the talky guy is he?
Astronomus: Pretty much.
Chuvil: *Looks at airship, thinking*

This is what we're going to ride on?

Astronomus: Precisely! It's the most I could do to take you to Ragorok's Island.

I call it the Fenerak010!

It has 4 cannons......

and a disc launcher just incase Ragorok pulls off something nasty.

I will sit in the front.....

while you 2 sit in the back with Solarin.

That is a weapon being held there for my personal defense.

Now both of you have to get on now!

Bonax: hmmm...........
Astronomus: Something the matter?

Bonax: Nothing. The ship looks fine to me!

Chuvil: Are you kidding me!? Who knows what could happen on a ship that was just made! We're expected to ride on this thing?

Bonax: Well it's our only chance we got to face Ragorok.

Astronomus: Bonax is right. Either you stay or assist Bonax!

Chuvil: ....................


Fine, but you better know for sure this thing will take us there.

Astronomus: It has been programmed to the best Chuvil, I know it will be a safe ride there. Now hop on!

*They get on the ship, hoping to succed and enter Ragorok*


Ragorok:'s almost there.......

With my machine, I will go back in time and save Blacklord from his dreaded suicide by Arfell.

With him brought back to life, I WILL WRECK HAVOC UPON THIS WORLD! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

Bonax won't know what hit him. hehehe.....

Razumus: Uhhhhhh.........


Ragorok: What is it?
Razumus: You might want to take a look.

*Turns his head*

Bonax: Geezzz, what happened to this place?

It's all black and mush and all that.

Ragorok: Well, guess he knew about all this.

Let's give him a warm welcome! Razumus, why not show him your "weapon"?

Razumus: *bows* Oh absoulutley! I'll make sure he gets eliminated.

Foolish Astronomus won't know what hit him. hehehe........

*The ship lands*

Bonax: You see Chuvil? Wasn't that bad of a ride right?
Chuvil: I'm now more worried about this place. What happened?
Astronomus: Ragorok did a lot of "testing" to this island, making it his own factory of machernery. It's sad I know.

*They get up*

Astronomus: Bonax, there are a lot of things Ragorok can pull on you. Be careful.

Bonax: I've dealt with him a few times already. You think I don't know what he's doing?

Astronomus: Making sure you know. Now i'll be on my way to fuel this ship. Good luck!

*The ship flies*

Astronomus: !


Bonax: What the- so much for safety.

?: I'm sorry, did he mention any weapon being on this island?

Bonax: ?

Razumus: Because he might have mentioned THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!!

You will perish Bonax!

Bonax: *sighs*

Look, after the few times I've dealt with Ragorok, I've been dealing with this stuff ever since.

So if you think you can beat me with that thing......

You're so wrong!

Razumus: If you think you have the ability Bonax.........

Then try me!

Bonax: Hmph. Fine.

*takes out sword*
You asked for it!

*A scopio leg tries to attack Bonax*

*Bonax dodges*

*And hits Scopio with his sword*

*With a fancy land*

Razumus: Ugghhhh.....Stupid Scopio!

Bonax: I can see you can't take me can you?

*Thornax Launchers aim at Bonax*

*Bonax dodges*

*Another fancy land*

Chuvil: Ugh........

Huh?.....................Oh.....I see.

*Points gun at Scopio*

*Laser comes after Scopio A.K.A. IM'A FIRIN' MY LASAR!!!!!!*

*Scopio malafunctions*

Razumus: Danget.....I'll be back Bonax......

Bonax: Thanks Chuvil! I'll take Ragorok alone!

Chuvil: Go Bonax! Before it's too late!

Ragorok: .......................You've arrived........How amusing.....

Bonax: I can't let you do this! Like Blacklord's going to obey you anyway!

Ragorok: Oh he will! I have my plans Bonax. Now scram! I'm only a split second from opening the portal.

Bonax: Not if I can help it!!

*Bonax swings his sword*

*Machine goes wrong*
Ragorok: NOO!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?!?!?!?

Chuvil: Bonax!


*The machine is gone*

Chuvil: ............Bonax............



Crap I think I unjynxed him from earlier....


Well thanks for viewing! Don't forget to rate and comment and tell me how'd you like it?

See ya Later!


 I made it 
  July 14, 2012
Quoting Clever Crowe Clear that you put a TON of work into the storyline/photography here. Cheers, m8!
Thanks Crowe, for appreciating the work I had into this thing. :D
 I like it 
  July 13, 2012
Clear that you put a TON of work into the storyline/photography here. Cheers, m8!
 I made it 
  July 3, 2012
Quoting Monty Leng This is a great first chapter, and the vehicles are very nice. I don't know why they didn't just barge in on the Fenerak and destroy Ragorok wth the multitude of guns! Anyway, great chapter, looking forward to the next one!
Yea! Another fan! Thanks! =)
 I made it 
  June 26, 2012
Quoting Wertman 8 Cool! This is gonna be WOWZA WORTHY!!!
Glad you're liking it Wertman. I just need a few more people to know about it. :)
 I like it 
  June 26, 2012
Cool! This is gonna be WOWZA WORTHY!!!
 I made it 
  June 25, 2012
Quoting sniperray213 Ultimate Sniper nice moc
Are you talking about the Fenerak010 ship?
 I like it 
  June 25, 2012
nice moc
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