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Potu's story (Part 6)
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Seven? Why seven? Accordingly, from everybody an another Respic (Red-spiked creature) has stolen the stones. This changes everything. But in the light of the fire, I saw that a Respic had white eyes, very strange but… it looked normally with those eyes…

When they were very near to the stone I shouted:
- Attack! But do not kill them!
Ledah looked disappointed.
Everybody used his/her elementel power on the Respics, but in little quantity. Just Hagi has not. She took the white-eyed, and started to talk with him with her mask power.
- Why are you here?
- I followed my companions, but they are controlled. I broke out from the control, but at the next time I think I will not. Our master…
Then a muscular white-blue thing pounced on the Respic with a big sword, what had again red eyes, and he has passed out. He knocked out everybody’s opponent.
- Do not worry, I will help you. – Said to everyone the being. It looked very helpful.

- Who are you? – I asked.
- I have not got name. A few days ago I was just a creature like those. – and he pointed at the seven Respic. – My master made a plan. He wanted to kill you! If you had been followed these creatures, you would have inveigled in a trap. You are lucky because I am here…
- And how have you been into this big… body?
- When I was little, I had a command: I needed to stole a stone from a matoran’s hands. But I have stolen it too early… I have been transformed by the stone.
- This is… possible? – I turned to Gyce and Taru.
They started to talk very low. When they were ready, Gyce said:
- Maybe!
- We are now so wise-clever! – said Ledah
- Maybe…- said the stranger – Maybe this is my….Destiny.
- From now, you need a name – I raised. – Would it be good the “Respy”?
- Hmmm… Yes.
- Salvation among us, Respy!
- That’s good. I have a team! And… I have a hiding place. I founded it after I transformed. It is not a big place, but, comfortable. Anybody wants to rest there?
- Yes! – said Ledah. He was tired.
- Okay, then, show to us.
- It is near. Until we reach it, just talk!
We talked about thirty minutes. Hagi talked a little bit with me.
- I think, you have seen the white-eyed thing.
- I named that those things Respic.
- Okay, then the Respic.
- Yes, I saw it.
- I talked to him…
- What?!
- You know, my mask power…
- Sorry, I forgot it.
- Then, he was out of control, I was talking with him, and when he wanted to say something about his master, Respy came and…
- Particular... Look, there is a cave!
- Yes, that is my hiding place. – Said Respy.
Then Taru came to me:
- Now we think that is no truth… - he whispered.
- What?
- That he transformed by a toa stone!
- Why? – I asked very excited.
- Because, he is white and blue, and that things were brown… The toa stone not changes the coulors…
Then we arrived to the cave.
- Come in, my friends! – Said Respy with a smile on his face.
Everybody went in the hiding place, but Gyce, Taru, Hagi and me with fear. We sat on a carved, stone bench.
- This is really comfortable, here is so cold! – established Kyra.
- But not for a long time…- answered Respy with an evil smile and diabolical eyes.
- Trap… - I said sadly and angry.
- You got it! This is a very good trap. Now I take you to the master… Oh wait… I forget something… You are in front of the master…

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  October 21, 2012
Great story,just a few questions and tips.As for questions,when is the next chapter coming up?Is Potu and his team going to eventually become normal Toa?If so,I'm going to wait to build you self-MOC.As for tips,next chapter you should have more pictures.Also,you should specify who is saying what like: Potu:(text) Respy:(text)
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  August 10, 2012
A very nice story and cool MOCs I shall continue to read your stories as they come Commander CJ
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  August 3, 2012
Hmmm interesting turn of events. I wonder where it will go from here...
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