SO THIS IS MY ENTERY FOR THE TOPPLING THE EMPIRE THINGY -sorry for caps
About this creation
-Log of skyrox-
Our emperor has been out of the battle for a while now, me and some other sith think it is time that a new emperor takes over a more.... active one like one of us.Got to end transmission the time has come to overthrow algren.
A thing thats can bring back ancient sith. By putting their lightsaber in the green dome.
Its powered by the crystals in the cones.
Here two of skyrox's guards fight sith guard that algren has turned on him.
A jedi dueling a wookie with two lightsabers (thats just overkill)
A female jedi turned sith (shes a jedi in missoin 13) she providing backup for the wookie if he needs it.
darth bane dueling the sith guard commander atop of the machine that brought him back
another shot of the duel
GREEBLES, my first attempt at greebles ,this MOC is full of them. This one is a scanner/bomb.
Skyrox and algren dueling to the death
skyrox also brought back vastine for another round of combat against algren
An R4 unit
My favourite greeble in the MOC I really like it
The back of the greeble nothing special
The left side of the greeble
Aother greeble but this one FAILED
some sort of plant the same one that will appearing mission 13 (I've took the pics of mission 13)
A robot and a GNK droid waddling into the supplies tent I made it myself
A better shot of the supplie tent
Even more greebles
A closershot of the greeble
A scientist with a protosaber and two guards with shields
A closer view of the scientist
another shot of the battle involving a wookie
An ariel shot of the whole MOC
The main battle
ariel of the wookie battle
ariel of the two skyrox's troopers
ariel of of darth banes battle
the scientist again
sorry that the pics blurry
Ariel of my fave greeble
A wookie sith, a jedi, and a female sith that skyrox likes
the sith guard and bane
the scientist and two guards
the other two guards and the other sith guard
late emperor algren, skrox the 3rd, and vastine
a better pic of vastine
'L' in arukebesh (star wars alphabet)
the wookie talking to the female sith after she killed the jedi
Vastine staring into the distance
the dead jedi
the one of skyrox's troopers clutching his wound after defeating the sith guard who killed his brother
the two of the scientists guards resting after the battle
A dead droid
Skyrox readying to kill algren
skyrox typing in the code to activate the bomb.
Skyrox stood there looking at algrens body and started reciting the sith code in the language of the sith:
Sh‚sotjontŻ ch‚tsatul nu tyŻk.
TyŻkjontŻ ch‚tsatul nu midwan.
MidwanjontŻ ch‚tsatul nu asha.
AshajontŻ kotswinot itsu nuyak.
Wonoksh Qy‚sik nun."
"Peace is a lie, there is only passion.
Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
The Force shall free me."
I think I should be emperor because I am willing to help anyone who needs help with the mission IE:what the planet looks like ECT...
I also have great Ideas for missions and stuff like that.I will also upgrade my building I just need a moral boost.so thats why I think I should be emperor I will also be active (I check Mocpages everyday to see whats going on)I will also judge as fairly as possible
It's alright Skyner but I feel it's rather unfocused. There are lots of things going on when the entire MOC should be aimed at really focusing your figure defeating and overthrowing Algren. If you look at Inferno's, currently the best entry in my opinion, then he is not even dueling Algren but is showing how his figure rose to power. There is no action but the focus is very strong on why he should be emperor and I think that is what this entry needs